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Category: AZN drama

Rating: as of now, PG-13, could be rated R later.

Characters:

Ali: Blonde haired non azn girl that is part of the group. Nickname: Alien

Larissa: Black haired Chinese girl Nickname: Haisha

Chee: Black haired Hmong girl Nickname: Kigakiku

Jessy: Black haired Bengali girl Nickname: Tokudan

Fefa: Half brasilian, half Indonesian brown haired girl Nickname:Atamagaokashii also "Atama"

Pua: Part Filipino, part japanese, half hawaiian black haired girl Nickname: Yuni-ku

The Miuchi aka the army: Siwon, Leeteuk, Sungmin, Donghae, Ryeowook, Eunhyuk, KyuHyun, Shindong, YeSung

The Kitanai 4: Heechul, Kibum, Kangin, and Matsujun

Description: The tale of the Kissaten girls and the infamous Kitanai 4 and their Miuchi or also known as the army

Disclaimer: Based on the manga and j-drama "Hana Yori Dango" but changed around a bit, but it is still non-fiction.






Welcome to Rokkugo High School. A place where the population of the school is ninety-five percent asian. It's an upscale private school where rich parents send their kids to get an education. They get dropped off in BMWs, Mercedes, Hummers, limos. They live in masions and travel around the world. At this school there is a pecking order. The ones that are super rich are at the top of the chain, followed by the rich kids, followed by the upper-middle kids.

"MARI TOMOYOSHI HAS GOTTEN A RED NOTICE!!!!!!" a school boy cried out running through the halls.

The red notice. The one thing that no one ever wanted. It meant that you had to did something to offend THEM. And you had to pay the consequences. That usually meant something embarassing.

Yes. Them. The Kitanai 4. Four of the uber rich boys in the school. So rich that they didnt have to wear uniforms because their parents paid off the school for them not too. They ruled over Rokkugo and no one, not even the teachers or staff could do anything about it.

There was Kibum, the angel-faced one of the four. He could get away with anything with that face. His family owned half of the state and lived comfortably. Very very comfortably.

Next was Kangin. He was the muscle of Kitanai 4. He was a womanizer, he loved older women, a total heatbreaker. His family owned Lee Bank, a huge bank that had many offices around the world.

The third member is Matsujun. He was the only one in the Kitanai 4 that was japanese, but he spoke korean fluently. He was the broody, quiet one of the group, didn't say much, always in the corner. His family owned Kaneko Corporation, that was estimated to have hundred of millions.

And finally, the leader, Heechul. This korean playboy did anything and everything he wanted and didn't care about a thing. If you crossed him, there would be hell to pay. When mad, he often would become violent. His family owned the other half of the state.

And then there was the Miuchi (the followers) or also known as The Army. They did the bidding of the Kitanai 4. Heechul would issue the red notice, the Miuchi would carry them out. Often the victims of the red notices would never come back to school after being terrorized by the Miuchi.

All of the students filed out into the dining hall below and watched as the Miuchi embarassed the girl. They threw water and pads at her, getting them stuck in her hair, throwing food at her, getting it all over her uniform. And they (the kitanai) just watched from their seats by the stairs. Heechul had a smile on his face, he knew that she would never come back to the school the next day.

"Heechul, this is getting boring, let's go" Kibum whispered to him.

"One second." he replied getting up out of his seat.

He walked over to Mari, and stood over her as she shook with fear. "What do you have to say for yourself?"

"I-I-I'm sorry." she spit out trying to hold back the tears.

"Serves you right, bitch. That's what you get for ruining my new shoes." he said while kicking a piece of lettuce in her face.

Kibum sighed. "Heechul, come on, let's go."

"Alright fine, I have to buy a new pair of shoes anyway." Heechul answered smirking. He bent down to her. "I'll be sending you the bill." The four walked out amid the cheering they got as they left.

"That is not right. They cannot keep bullying people at this school." Jessy said. "It's unfair."

"And what do you suggest we do?" Pua asked leaning against the lockers.

"I don't know, but what they're doing is wrong."

"Well, yeah, that's obvious, but no one can do anything about it. We're stuck like this until they graduate." Fefa said.

Jessy sighed. "I know. I just wish they would go away."

"So do a lot of people." Chee said.
« Last Edit: 15 January 2009, 03:09:24 by pukers808 »

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4
« Reply #1 on: 20 July 2008, 06:40:05 »
omgaaaaah, i cant belive you did it!!!

they're so hateful at this, but i cannot stop loving them :'( ::lol::

cant wait for the rest! :-*

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4
« Reply #2 on: 20 July 2008, 06:56:30 »
Hahahahah, yeah, if I didnt, Jessy would keel me. ::lol::

Hateful, but you can't stop loving the suju boiis :'(

DANKE FEFA!!! XD

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4
« Reply #3 on: 20 July 2008, 07:31:53 »
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! You did it! XDD Heechul you puta! But that's why I love you, I must admit. LULZ. Gute start, now give us more now! Don't abandon this fic like you have done to your other fics. :'(

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4
« Reply #4 on: 21 July 2008, 02:56:17 »
Okay peepz here's another updizzle.




And of course the boys were right, the girl, mari, didn't return to school the next day. Her parents actually transfered her out of the school. "This has to stop, I'm serious." said Jessy wiping a table at the coffee shop.

"What should we do Tokudan?" Larissa asked.

"Maybe key their car?" suggested Fefa

"That's not crazy enough Atama, you really must be slacking." joked Chee.

Everyone of the girls had nicknames. Ali was called Alien because she was the only caucasian girl that hung out with them, plus she was an underclassman. Larissa, who was chinese, was nicknamed Haisha. No matter what team she gets picked for, they always lose. Hence her nickname "loser". Chee's nickname was Kigakiku, which means thoughtful. She is always thinking of others before herself. Jessy, was also called Tokudan. Which means "special", to the girls, it would be said in so many different ways. "Atama" is Fefa's shortened nickname, from Atamagaokashii which means insane. Fefa can get pretty crazy. She once was dating a japanese boy and was so possessive, she watched his every move. Pua's nickname was Yuni-ku, which means unique, since she was always beating to the sound of her own drums. Her tastes in everything were eclectic.

"I say, if you're gonna take on the Kitanai, you better be prepared for a war." Pua said plopping down in a chair.

"There are six of us, and four of them." replied Jessy

"Don't forget the army." pointed out Larissa.

"So it would be 13 of them and the six of us. We don't have a chance." Pua said quietly looking at her nails.

"And," continued Chee, "none of us have gotten a red notice."

"And I would like to keep it that way." Pua snapped.

Chee nodded in agreement.

Jessy sighed. She looked around the shop and looked at every girl. She knew that there was a way to beat the Kitanai, she just had to figure out a way. Someone had to get a red notice. But who could handle the Kitanai? She looked at Fefa, she was crazy enough, but she was afraid that Fefa would take it too far. Larissa? No, she's afraid of what Heechul would do to her. Ali? No way. She was too young. Pua? Pua would get revenge and make sure that the Kitanai and the Miuchi were destroyed. But she also noticed that Heechul liked to look at Chee. A lot. Maybe she should get the both of them to get red notices. But that would be too much, wouldn't it?


"Mum, have you seen my watch?" Pua called out walking to her mother's room.

"No, I haven't. Have you checked your closet?"

"Yes." she sighed.

"Well I'm sorry dear, then I don't know."

"Whatever." she muttered. "I'm leaving now. I'll see you whenever."

"Bye honey." her mother replied.

She got into the Mercedes that was waiting for her outside. She gazed out of the window while the car pulled out of the front driveway and took her to school. Her father was always gone, and her mother was too involved in herself to really care about what was going on.

"Um, can we stop at Chee's?" she asked her driver.

"Sure ma'am"

As soon as the car pulled up to Chee's mansion, Pua got out and ran up the door and rapped on the door. Thankfully Chee was the one that opened the door.

"Hey, do you need a ride?"

"Not really. Why?"

"Dunno, just asking. Come on, I'll give you one anyway."

Chee shrugged. "Cool beans."



"So do you seriously think Jessy would wage war against the Kitanai?" Pua asked Chee.

"Dunno. I know she hates them, but I never thought that she would want to take it far."

"What is she playing at then? What the hell is she thinking of doing?"

"I have no idea. But I wouldn't be surprised if she starts the war." Chee said while they walked to their lockers.

"I hope she doesn't so anything stupid."

Chee opened her locker and her eyes grew wide. "Oh.my.god." she whispered.

"What?" Pua saw her face. "Whats-? Oh my god."

A red notice. It hung in Chee's locker with the words 'K4' in black. Chee's legs gave out and she sank to the ground. "Why? I didn't do anything!" she said as tears swelled up in her eyes. Pua crouched beside her. "I have no idea."

"What should I do?"

"Nothing. Don't anything until we talk to Jessy about this."

"Do you think she had something to do with this?"

"I hope not."

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #5 on: 21 July 2008, 06:55:25 »
LETS BRING DOWN DA BISHES! ::lol::

I cant stop looking at your sig, Pua. Siwonnie <3


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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #6 on: 21 July 2008, 21:38:47 »
OMG I haven't read it yet. I'm too excited. I don't know who you're gonna pair me up with but ZOMG I'm so excited I can hardly contain myself to read it. I'll post again in a bit to post my reply to the fic. OMG so excited. XD

Oh yeah, why do I get the hard name?  I can hardly pronounce it. At least Fefa gets a nickname ::lol::  Jay kay jay kay

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #7 on: 21 July 2008, 21:42:26 »
OMG I KNOW THIS MANGA!!! I never read it but there was a Taiwanese soap based off of it. It was called "Meteor Garden" with boyband "F4". I never finished it. I think I saw half of the show. ANyway I should finish reading it before typing in random stuff and spamming your fic. Hahaha.

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #8 on: 21 July 2008, 21:45:44 »
Okay okay, we can call you Kiga then for short. ::lol:: Jaa, I watched the j-drama on Kiku, my friend got me hooked on it. :D

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #9 on: 21 July 2008, 21:46:23 »
Excited much Chee? ::lol::

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #10 on: 21 July 2008, 21:54:19 »
OMGGGGGGG JESSSSSSYYYYY!!!!! How could you do that to meeeeeeeeee?? *wwwwaaaaaaahhhhh* I'm "Kigakiku" the thoughtful one! How could you do that to me? Now Heechul's gonna jump on me in a game of Death Red Light Green Light as Kangin pretends to not see Heechul move around. :'(

OMGZZZZ Pua update!!! I'm thuper akdicted to this fic!!! THough I'm scared with how the war will go out.

ROFL I laughed so hard at:
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Atama" is Fefa's shortened nickname, from Atamagaokashii which means insane. Fefa can get pretty crazy. She once was dating a japanese boy and was so possessive, she watched his every move.
Will Fefa's ex make a cameo? ::lol::

Oh jaaa I think I've seen nude photos of Matsujun. But I could be wrong.

And jaaaa my best priend has watched the J-Drama too. She said it was gute. We've swapped tales of the Japanese one compared to the Taiwanese one. Sounds like the j-drama is better.

It's okay, you can keep my hard name ::lol:: It's all up to you.

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #11 on: 21 July 2008, 21:59:40 »
Hahahaha, maybe Silba can make a one time cameo in the fic. ::lol::


jaa, there's nudie pics of Matsujun. *wiggles eyebrows*


The j-drama one is soooo much more better.


Well, I shortened Fefa's, and yours is a little hard to pronounce, so I'll short the name to "Kiga".

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #12 on: 21 July 2008, 22:05:05 »
kk thanks. :'( Update soon. Please. I am so addicted.

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 20]
« Reply #13 on: 22 July 2008, 00:28:36 »
An updizzle because I loff you guys.





"Jessy! Just what the hell are you doing?" Pua asked her angrily.

"What are you talking about?" she answered wide eyed.

"Chee just got a red notice. Please tell me that you had nothing to do with that."

"I didn't. I swear!!"

She looked at Jessy carefully. She didn't seem to be lying, but with Jessy, you can never be sure. "Alright, I'll take your word for it." Pua said as she turned around. And ran right into Matsujun. Orange juice spilled on his white shirt.

"Watch where you're going." he said curtly.

"Excuse me?" she replied giving him a look.

Her dark brown eyes glittered as she glared angrily at him. Her black eyebrows winged over almond shaped eyes. Her black hair pulled back into a tight ponytail. She looked like a normal student with her uniform on, the middle length sleeved white collared shirt with a gray tie and blue sweater vest and blue and gray plaid pleated skirt. The only thing that was different was her knee high black doc marten boots. She was one of the Kissaten girls.

"Hello?? What the hell are you staring at?" she snapped.

"Nothing. Nothing." he replied smiling.

"weirdo." she muttered under her breath.

"Yuni-ku!! Yuni-ku wait!!!" called out a voice. Pua turned around and saw Chee running towards her. She stopped in mid stride when she saw Matsujun. "Uh, nevermind, it can wait."

"No, issokay, really." she answered.

"Yeah, YUNI-KU was just getting out of my way." he sneered.

Pua looked back at him and snorted. "You wish."

"HEEY! what's going on here?" Heechul asked as he walked towards them.

"Oh no, we're in for it now" whispered Chee squeezing her eyes shut tightly.

"Nothing, just a kissaten girl being clumsy." Matsujun replied.

"Ah, yes, did I give you a red notice?" Heechul asked Chee.

"uh, um, yes."

He smirked. "We should take care of it then, don't you think?"

The Miuchi grabbed Chee and hauled her down to the dining hall. Pua ran after them ready to save Chee from embarassment. She pushed her way forward as they started to bully Chee, pushing her around, and poking her with yard sticks. Pua grabbed one boy by the arm and punched him in the face. She then grabbed the yard stick and jabbed another boy in the stomach. She dragged Chee to the side and whipped another boy in the face with the yard stick. Heechul start clapping and stood up.

"well, well, well, all of the kissaten girls stick together no matter what, eh?" she said with a smirk. He walked over to Pua who was hovered over Chee.

"You damn right." She snapped back.

He bent over Chee and grabbed her chin and pulled it up to his face. "It's over. Your friend just took your place." He looked into her eyes and she lowered her eyes to his lips. They were not even an inch apart from eachother. Pua watched curiously as they had a moment. She looked at Matsujun who was staring at her.

"Now I have to get new clothes because these are spoiled." Heechul said still looking at Chee. He got up and with the rest of the Kitanai, walked out of the dining hall.

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Re: ATTACK OF THE KITANAI 4 [updated July 21]
« Reply #14 on: 22 July 2008, 01:48:26 »
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! Pua is a gute priend. TT^TT Saving Chee but now I'm scared for her since Heechul's gonna put all the blame on her. But what made Heechul give Chee the red sign?

JESSY? perhaps? gaaah loff you for the update. I wonder if Matsujun and Pua will get some humping going on?

Update soon Pua!!