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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #15 on: 21 October 2008, 20:32:04 »
this fic keeps gettin' bettah! CHACHA AND BENJAY!!! ::lol:: what a couple of partners Ali chose ::lol::

poor Ting, TOP is a real bish, but then again he seems to like her. Must be hard :'(

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« Reply #16 on: 21 October 2008, 21:09:14 »
i'm starting to hate myself now too, chee :'( ::lol::.

hahahahahahahahaha you're making it so difficult for me to like the real top now ::lol::.

thank yooooo for updating every night! however, i'm always reading this before i go to sleep ::lol::.

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #17 on: 21 October 2008, 23:22:35 »
Well... Top has a realll anger problem doesn't he? ::lol::

And awww Ting! She has to make up her mind, although I don't think she'll want to leave the Big Bang loving behind :P

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #18 on: 22 October 2008, 00:57:38 »
Hahahahaha Ting is attracted to Benny and his strange dance?

How the hell are those two going to protect me?? :'( ::lol::

Update soon!

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #19 on: 22 October 2008, 02:50:21 »
Hahahahaha. I bet you Ting secretly enjoyed being touched and kissed by TOP! GOD, Top, what a putacabra. Poor Ali. Sachny are going to soon go off and do their own thing...it's only a matter of time.

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #20 on: 22 October 2008, 23:27:15 »
HAHHAHAHAHAH Oh god, just looking at the cast had me laughing out loud "Ting, Top?s favorite girl" LULZ LULZ LULZ Fefa and Jessy, best hoes around, why am I not surprised? ::lol:: And Sven-Göran double you tee eff? ::lol::

hahahahah, don't deny the fact that you like it when TOP is groping you Ting, you know you do!

What was Ali thinking when she asked Sacha and Benny to protect her?  ::lol:: Had she been smoking?

This is such a great fic, can't wait for moar!!!

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.21 Chapter 2 Update)
« Reply #21 on: 23 October 2008, 21:29:35 »
AN: I wrote personal response but cr17's being really lame so I don't think they came up.
Also, the chapters are going to get longer.
And Anja, I'll have a photo for you up soon....ehehe

~Chapter Three~
   The next day, there was much excitement going on at Tempo before the club even opened. Top had brought in a new girl, and everyone was running around to put things in order for the new girl. The girl was very pretty, shy, and from what Top was claiming, a virgin. Ali had come into Lady Larissa?s office, wanting to speak with Fefa and Jessy, but was distracted when she met with Lady Larissa who was fussing over a young girl Ali had never seen before. It was there that Lady Larissa introduced the girls to one another.
   ?Ali, this is Pua, Top?s newest girl,? Lady Larissa said, brushing Pua?s hair. ?Pua, don?t be afraid of Ali. She?s a journalist and she?s going to be spending some time observing what we do. She means no harm at all.?
   ?Oh, a new girl,? Ali said, leaning up against the door.
   ?What?s her name again?? Benny asked, sticking his head in.
   ?Just stay outside,? Ali ordered, shoving him and Sacha away. ?Don?t mind those two. So, Lady Larissa, how often do you get new girls??
   ?It depends,? Lady Larissa said, putting Pua?s makeup on for her. ?Sometimes we get half a dozen or so girls and we throw them out to the bars. Some girls Top or a few of the other men find on the streets, and depending on what Top and I think of them they can go anywhere from the bars to the Roundabouts to the High Rollers.?
   ?And Pua, where are you going??
   ?High Rollers,? Lady Larissa said, turning away from Pua as her phone rang.
   Ali observed Pua. She was indeed very pretty, which Ali had noticed all the High Roller girls were: pretty beyond belief. It was as if any of them could have given up their lives as prostitutes and just become supermodels. Pua looked young as well nervous. She had her hands clasped together in her lap as she stared at her own reflection with her makeup only partially done.
   ?Excuse me,? Lady Larissa said as she hung up on the phone. ?Top needs me for a few minutes. Ali, can you keep Pua company??
   ?Certainly,? Ali said with a nod as Lady Larissa walked out of her office.
   ?So, how much are you worth?? Sacha asked, sticking his head in.
   ?I said keep your head out of Lady Larissa?s office!? Ali shouted, shoving Sacha?s head out from the doorway. ?Again, sorry for those idiots. So, Pua, that?s a beautiful name.?
   ?Thank you,? Pua said, looking over at Ali. ?So what are you doing here? Just writing an article about Top or something??
   ?Somewhat,? she said, shifting her weight from one leg to the other. ?I?m just beginning my work on Top and his business. Don?t worry, though; no real names are going to be given out. But ummm...I was wondering, how did you end up here? Did Top personally pick you up??
   ?I ran away from home when I turned 18 a few months ago,? Pua began, ?and I took a bus from the small town I lived in and came here. I wanted to become a movie star, you know? Stupid. Of course I ended up in the streets after I ran out of money. A couple weeks ago, when I was sitting outside this store, hoping people would give me money, I see Top and some of his friends down the street. He just smiled at me, and he looked so hot, like always, with his eyeliner and looking like a rap star.
   ?I saw him every day from then on, and he?s so clean and I?m not, so I was afraid to go talk to him, but he came to me last week and began talking to me. He was like, ?Hi, my name?s Top, what?s yours?? and I felt so good that someone was talking to me like a real person and not some dumb runaway, you know? After a few days he began telling me that he wanted to make a deal with me. He would buy me clothes, food, jewelry, everything; he would even let me have a nice bed to sleep on, but only if I worked for him.
   ?I?m not stupid, you know? So I was like, ?You want me to be a prostitute?? and he told me it?s not like the girls I see working the streets. His is better and I would make so much more money, and I wouldn?t get in trouble by the cops. I didn?t believe him at first. So he took me here the other night, letting me see this club, and he even showed me a room he had saved up for me. How can I say no? Have you seen the High Rollers girls? Gosh, they?re all gorgeous! So here I am, getting made up for my big debut, as Top was saying earlier.?
   ?So are you prepared to go out and do it?? Ali asked.
   ?Well, he said I didn?t have to have sex yet,? Pua said. ?I?m scared, still. Guys lie a lot, but Top?s been so sweet to me. I hope I don?t have to have sex tonight. It?s stupid, I know, but you don?t know what it?s like to walk in here and be treated like a princess when you?ve been starving for a long time with nowhere to go. I?m actually a virgin, but you know, a lot of call girls start out as virgins, and Top told me I have nothing to worry about.?
   ?Well, it was nice meeting you, Pua,? Ali said, glancing at the clock, realizing that she was late with meeting up with Fefa and Jessy. ?I have to be off, but I hope you have a good debut.?
   Ali wanted to discuss the arrangements made for Pua with either Lady Larissa or Top, but knew she had to wait.
   ?Ali!? Jessy greeted happily as she opened the door to the room she shared with Fefa. ?We were wondering when you?d show up.?
   ?Happy to see you, too,? Sacha said as he began to enter the room with Ali.
   ?No!? Ali snapped, turning around to stop Sacha and Benny. ?You two sit outside the room! I don?t need you trying to hit on the girls and checking them out when I?m trying to talk to them.?
   ?You?re seriously killing all the fun in my life,? Benny sighed, sitting down on the ground outside the room.
   ?We don?t mind them,? Fefa said with a laugh after Jessy shut the door.
   ?They?re distracting,? Ali said with frustration.
   After Ali sat herself down in a chair as both Fefa and Jessy were doing their hair and putting on their makeup, Ali began the interview, first asking what they felt about the new girl, Pua.
   ?Oh,? Fefa said with a laugh, ?she?s gorgeous. I am predicting that if she lasts, she?ll be stiff competition with us.?
   ?Brownie Triplets?? Jessy asked, looking away from the mirror for a second. Both girls laughed together. ?Well, honestly, Top really lucked out with finding her. It?s rare to find a girl and put her into the High Roller?s circle. Fefa and I are one of those girls. Thank God we never had to work the bars or be Roundabouts.?
   ?So how does someone like Pua work out?? Ali asked. ?You know, since she?s a virgin and all??
   ?Oh, yeah,? Fefa said with a nod. ?Top?s going to have a lot of fun with that. There was, like, one girl a long time ago who was in the same situation as Pua, and basically what Top did was flaunt her around to all these rich men. Eventually, there was this bidding war with which rich dude got to take her virginity. Top made a lot of money off of her.?
   ?Who is she?? Ali asked.
   ?Oh, I forgot her name,? Fefa said returning to straightening her hair. ?She was pretty.?
   ?Top sold her off shortly after that because she got way addicted to cocaine,? Jessy said. ?I think she was sold off to a brothel in Thailand or something. For all we know, she found more cocaine and over dosed.?
   ?How did you guys end up here?? Ali turned the attention to Fefa and Jessy now.
   ?I dropped out of high school,? Jessy said, ?and I was staying with a friend of mine, and her boyfriend ran drugs for G-Dragon. One day, my friend tells me that her boyfriend got us into a hot club, not Tempo of course since you need to be a list and the whole income thing, but anyway, we got into this club a few blocks from here. We meet Top and G-Dragon, and all night long Top was flattering me with, ?Baby, you so fine? and all that stuff. A few days later he showed up at my friend?s place and offered me this job. Like most girls, I was hesitant, but, of course, Top charmed his way into getting me to say yes. Unlike Pua, I wasn?t a virgin, but it was still scary to sleep with random men. I love my job now, though.?
   ?And you, Fefa?? Ali asked, turning her attention to Fefa now.
   ?Oh, I love this story,? Jessy couldn?t help saying.
   ?Well,? Fefa said slowly, ?I ran away from home to try to become a model. Of course, when I got here it didn?t work out like I thought it would, so I was working at Subway. One day, Top walks in and he notices me. He kept trying to find out where I lived, and if I lived with anyone, and if I was in school. I thought he was just some creep trying to hit on me, and it didn?t help that he invited me to go to the club with him that night. I declined, but he kept insisting. So, finally after two weeks of him and his friends bugging me at work, I caved in. We came to Tempo, and I saw everything. He even had Jessy come to me and show me around.?
   ?And we?ve been the Brownie Twiis since then,? Jessy said proudly.

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.23 Chapter 3 Update)
« Reply #22 on: 24 October 2008, 01:20:02 »
What TOP wants, TOP gets ::lol::

Poor Benny and Sacha. All they want is to see is some booty and drink some beer, Chee :'(

Update soon!

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.23 Chapter 3 Update)
« Reply #23 on: 24 October 2008, 11:34:29 »
Oh lord, Sachny, stay out of it. Poor Ali. Sachny is the best form of security LA has to offer. :-\

Poor Pua. She seems like a nervous wreck, but I'm curious to know what will happen to her. ::lol::

The Brownie Twiis...what can I say? Are we that easy? "I love my job"?...I'm scared. :'(

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.23 Chapter 3 Update)
« Reply #24 on: 24 October 2008, 14:49:00 »
The Brownie Twiis...what can I say? Are we that easy? "I love my job"?...I'm scared. :'(

me too :'(


poor Ali, Sachny being their usual DUPE selves ::lol::

aaaaw, poor Pua, I hope everything turns out fine for her :(

TOP is a demanding bish, how annoying

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.23 Chapter 3 Update)
« Reply #25 on: 25 October 2008, 16:05:57 »
Hahahaha, Fefa and Jessy aka the Brownie Twiis are such whores! No wonder they're the biggest money makers. "I love my job"  ::lol:: sluts!

Awww, I feel so bad for Pua, ran out of money and has to work as a prostitute  :'( I have a feeling that Tae Yang will be one of the customers who will take part in the bidding war (if there ever is one) to be the one who gets to take her virginity.

Can't wait to find out what happens next, when will G-Dragon's drug addicted girlpriend Chee make an appearance? I want bish fights between her and Ting when they both try to get the attention from the love of their lives...TOP! Update soon!

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« Reply #26 on: 26 October 2008, 16:19:28 »
AN: Fangz girls for the interest of my rather useless fic so far. I swear, I'll get into the juicy stories by at least chapter 5!! Until then, try to enjoy this chapter of more talk, talk, talk, explain, explain, explain.
~Chapter Four~
   Ting glanced over at the new girl, Pua, and wondered what Top thought of her. Was he attracted to her like he was with Ting? Or was she just another money-making machine like all his other girls? She wasn?t sure what she wanted him to feel about Pua. Sure, if Top stopped paying all of his love and affection to her, Ting wouldn?t have to act as if she was always happy to be around Top. But then what would happen to her once Pua took her place? Would she become like the Brownie Twiis and forced to sleep with ten men every night? Would Top kick her out onto the streets? She was afraid.
   ?Why are you so tense?? Top asked Ting, sliding his arm around her waist. ?Are you feeling okay??
   ?Yeah,? Ting replied with a nod. ?We?re just directly under the a/c, that?s all.?
   Top took off his blazer and put it over her shoulders. He kissed her on the cheek before turning his attention to Pua, who was on his other side. Tipping her chin up with his index finger, Top marveled at the perfection of Pua?s beautiful face. This was the face that was going to get him a lot of money, he could feel it.
   ?You look hot,? he said with a nod. ?Don?t worry, baby, just sit back and relax.?
   ?Look at the big boss man and his two lovely ladies,? one man announced as he approached Top?s table. The man had on a black Louis Vuitton cap, and looked mysterious with a pair of aviators on, though the club itself was pretty dark with the strobe lights in the background.
   ?Tae!!? Top announced happily as he gestured for his friend to sit down across from him and his two girls. ?I wasn?t expecting you here tonight!?
   ?I decided to spend a few days here, and where else would I go first?? the man named Tae said as he sat down. He stared at Pua for a few moments, and noticed that she was afraid to look him in the eye. ?Who?s the lovely lady to your right? I don?t remember seeing her the last time I was here.?
   ?Ahh, so I see you like what you see,? Top said, sitting up straight. He caressed Pua?s jaw line with his finger softly. ?This is the newest girl I have. Her name?s Pua, and tonight?s her first night here.?
   ?Way fresh out of the water,? Tae said with a nod, his eyes unable to leave Pua, who now seemed quite embarrassed.
   ?Very fresh,? Top agreed. ?So fresh, you might say she?s untouched.?
   ?If you?re saying what I think you?re saying,? Tae said, gently rubbing his chin with his hand, ?you know I?m interested. I don?t remember the last time I was with a virgin.?
   ?They cost more, a lot more,? Top said with all seriousness.
   ?And you think I don?t have the money for it?? Tae asked, insulted. ?How long have we known each other, Top? How can you diss me like that??
   ?All I?m saying is you?re my friend but I don?t give out discounts,? Top said. ?To be honest, man, I have a lot of people already asking questions about what she?s worth. A gentleman gave me a hefty offer.?
   ?How much??
   ?How much are you going to offer??
   Tae stared back at Pua, who seemed so very shy, something that turned him on. He usually was with girls who were very experienced and aggressive in bed, but a man occasionally needed something soft and tender. It also helped that Pua was one of the most beautiful women he had ever laid eyes on.
   ?A nickel.?
   ?A nickel?? Top repeated, seeming to have been offended. ?My brother, my brother...I have someone offering double that! Your shiny nickel is nothing compared to the dime dangling in my face.?
   ?On her first night here, some punk ass bitch offered ten grand?? Tae demanded. ?Damn, she?s going to cost more than your pretty Ting, ain?t she??
   ?I?ll consider myself lucky if her first time ends up as much as Ting,? Top said.
   ?I can?t invest ten grand right away on a girl, even one as gorgeous as Pua,? Tae said. ?Tell you what, save the date for her deflowering, and I?ll consider raising the price.?
   ?Don?t expect me to wait long,? Top said.
   ?Well, look, man,? Tae said, leaning forward, ?I?d be more inclined to show more interest if I got to know Pua a bit better, if you feel me. A virgin isn?t as easy as getting someone like Fefa, and just fucking her, you know? Pua seems like she needs a bit of extra care before her big night with Tae.?
   Top laughed gently before replying, ?You don?t even know if you?ll have her yet.?
   ?But I am interested,? Tae offered. ?Let?s just say, if I got a bit of one on one with her, you know, talking, that?s it, and when I leave this place, I?ll give you a new price offer.?
   ?Fine,? Top said. ?You spend an hour or so with Pua, but you can?t leave the club, at all, and I?ll have one of my boys go with you two, just in case you decide to be a punk ass and try to pull something on my precious virgin.?
   Before she knew what was happening, Pua was being escorted away from Top and Ting, and led off with Tae.
   ?She?ll be fine,? Top said as he looked down at Ting frowning at him.
   ?It?s not her I?m concerned about,? Ting said. ?I?m concerned for your sanity. Aren?t you afraid that Tae Yang and Pua might start developing feelings for one another? I wouldn?t put it past Tae Yang to sneak Pua out of here if he does end up falling for her.?
   ?Tae doesn?t fall for women,? Top said, putting his arm around her waist again. ?Even if he did, he wouldn?t double cross me. He?d buy Pua, and I wouldn?t mind that at all. More money for me.?
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   ?Oh, God, oh, GOD!? Ali shouted as she set down her bottle of Sprite. ?Sacha! Sacha! Do you see who?s sitting at the table with Top??
   ?You mean the idiot in the Louis Vuitton cap?? Benny asked, setting down his own bottle of soda. ?What a dick; he?s wearing sunglasses in the club.?
   ?Shut up!? Ali shot him an angry glare. ?He?s Tae Yang! He?s a famous jewel thief! The feds all over the world don?t have any evidence to prove that he?s the jewel thief, but it?s like Top: we all know what he does but the cops can?t prove it. He?s really rich!?
   ?Not surprising he?s here,? Sacha said with a chuckle before sipping his soda.
   ?What do you mean?? Benny asked. ?How do you two know about him, but I don?t??
   ?Because you aren?t awesome,? Sacha replied. He threw his hand up to his forehead, forming his thumb and index finger into an ?L?. ?You?re the Loser of our trio!? Sacha bounced along to the beat of the music and began singing, ?Benny! Benny! Loo-ssahh! Loo-ssaah!?
   ?Shut up!? was all Benny could come up with, throwing a couple peanuts at Sacha. ?But anyway, what does Sacha mean, Ali??
   ?Oh,? Ali grinned gently, ?he apparently has an incurable addiction to women. I should have known that he?d be friends with Top. He has a pad in LA, and it only makes sense that he?s a sex addict and he?d come here. I have to meet him.?
   ?We finally get a night to enjoy the music, and drink, though it?s just soda,? Sacha sighed, staring at his bottle of orange soda, ?and Ali cuts our fun short to go meet the famed K.R.N. Jewel Thief.?
   ?Sacha,? Ali said, frowning at him, ?please, stop whining. The more you whine, the less fun you?ll you have. Come on!?
   Both men set down their sodas, and followed Ali to go find Top and Tae Yang.

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #27 on: 26 October 2008, 17:09:46 »
Hahahahahahahahaha. Poor Pua. Tae Yang must rly like Pua. I wonder who the other bidder is. ::lol::

Hahaha. Sachny, so spethal. Without them this fic would be lost. ::lol::

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #28 on: 26 October 2008, 22:46:11 »
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Would she become like the Brownie Twiis and forced to sleep with ten men every night?

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A virgin isn?t as easy as getting someone like Fefa, and just fucking her, you know?

I fear for our future in this fic, Jessy :'(

I wonder who's the other bidder for Pua ::lol::

Sachny is da LULZ hahahaahahahaha

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #29 on: 26 October 2008, 23:41:56 »
TOP is so slimy and scary :'( But at the same time as I found him scary I couldn't stop thinking about the link Ting posted yesterday of him dressed up as a woman  ::lol::

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  ?What do you mean?? Benny asked. ?How do you two know about him, but I don?t??
   ?Because you aren?t awesome,? Sacha replied. He threw his hand up to his forehead, forming his thumb and index finger into an ?L?. ?You?re the Loser of our trio!? Sacha bounced along to the beat of the music and began singing, ?Benny! Benny! Loo-ssahh! Loo-ssaah!?
hahahahahah you can always rely on Sachny to bring the LULZ. The loser part reminded me of how my former history teacher showed us the "L" sign and claimed that it was "the famous sign for victory" while the class was LOL-ing.

I already love the fic so if you're saying that it gets more juicy in the next chapter I can't wait for moar!
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