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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #30 on: 27 October 2008, 02:19:08 »
Tae Yang is one shifty krn eh? ::lol:: And have some manners, boy! You can't be staring at her like that!

T.O.P is a closet freak, I can guess it. ::lol:: And who is the other bidder for Pua? I hope there aren't any DBSK boiiz in this. I'll never be able to read the fic again ::lol::

Update soon! And Anja, I lovee your sig ;D

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #31 on: 27 October 2008, 09:45:59 »
Tata! i'm so definetly gonna' read this fanfic! hahahaha ::lol::

I love BigBang t♥♥  much. haha
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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #32 on: 11 November 2008, 22:28:50 »
A/N: As promised, once Fefa updates, I will post my new chapter. Enjoy! I don't think I'll wait so long to update anymore. I'm kind of losing inspiration for this fic and it barely started. ::lol::
~Chapter Five~
   Browsing her way through the men eyeing at her, Jessy tried to find the man she believed was most desperate to throw away three grand on her. Her eyes locked with a pair of blue eyes, and the man grinned, running his hand through his shoulder length blonde hair. She thought to herself that he looked familiar, as if she had seen him somewhere before. Trying to figure out where she had seen him before, she walked over, and sat down beside him at the bar.
   ?Do you like what you see?? she asked, tilting her head in toward him.
   He nodded. He ordered them a few drinks and she noticed his accent. Right as Top came over to ask the customer how he was enjoying his night, Jessy realized at last who he was.
   ?So Guti, I see you have met the lovely Miss Jessy,? Top said, resting his hand on Jessy?s back. ?If you are interested in a more private conversation, we can have things arranged in a few minutes.?
   ?How much?? Guti asked, his eyes still on Jessy as she took a sip of her drink.
   ?Three grand,? Top replied. ?She?s worth every cent. Look me in the eye and tell me you?ve seen better looking girls than her.?
   ?Pretty girls aren?t always the best lovers,? Guti remarked. Jessy felt offended, but kept her composure and smiled.
   ?Perhaps I?m wasting my time on the wrong Real Madrid player,? Jessy said. ?If it?s not a beautiful woman you seek, tell me, which of your friends should I go for??
   She made to turn away, but there was a firm hand around her wrist. Turning over expecting to see Top telling her to not give up so easily, Jessy smiled as she saw Guti staring at her.
   ?I never said no,? he said. ?Set me up for an hour with this girl.?
   Top grinned as he gestured for one of his boys to call Lady Larissa. Jessy somehow always got men to want her in the oddest ways.
*
    Fefa led him into the candlelit room with the white cotton sheets he always favored. Shutting the door behind her, she heard him walk over to the bed before sitting down on there.
   ?Your girlfriend won?t mind?? she asked, strutting over as sexily as she could toward him.
   ?She?s only with me for my drugs,? G-Dragon said, looking up at Fefa as she stood before him. ?I actually think she prefers it when I sleep with other women than with her. Besides, she never stopped me before, why would she stop me now??
   ?Why you are with her, I don?t understand,? Fefa said with a headshake, leaning forward closer to him.
   His arms were wrapped around her waist, and she tilted her head to the side as he tried to sneak a kiss on the lips. This was a bit ?Pretty Woman?, but Fefa never kissed customers on the lips. It was something she felt was not needed in the task of getting a man off. Some regulars tried to sneak in kisses on the lips a few times, but they knew never to cross the line. G-Dragon?s lips instead landed on her neck, and he grunted as she ran her fingers through his hair. Right as he pulled the straps of her bra off her shoulders, there was a loud bang outside followed by Top?s voice shouting something unintelligible.
   ?Don?t mind that,? Fefa said, turning her attention back to G-Dragon. ?Some girl probably pissed him off again.?
   But before they could resume what they were doing, they heard Top slapping a girl very loudly as he shouted, ?Don?t fucking try to do that ever again!?
   There came a grunt with the slap, and then a female?s voice say, ?Is this what you call foreplay??
   G-Dragon, forgetting Fefa completely, stood up and rushed out of the room. Pulling her bra straps back onto her shoulders, Fefa cursed at the drama that ensued the girl that was troubling Top right now. She threw on some pink silk robes and followed G-Dragon outside.
*
   They were in bed together, lying side by side, catching their breaths as they stared up at the dimly lit ceiling. After a few minutes of silence, Jessy turned to her side and propped her head up on her arm.
   ?Did you enjoy yourself?? she asked.
   ?You,? Guti said, pulling Jessy?s body up against his own, ?are amazing.?
   She laughed as he sucked gently on her earlobe. As they were fooling around on the bed, there was a loud clamor outside, which sounded like Top.
   ?Don?t mind that,? Jessy whispered as Guti?s attention was distracted. ?Just Top and some bitch going at it. You still have twenty minutes with me, you know. You shouldn?t waste any second, considering how much you paid, too.?
   Guti smirked before flipping them over on the bed.
*
   Ali, Sacha, and Benny had found Tae Yang sipping some drinks at the High Rollers? bar with Pua, but there was no Top in sight, so they decided to eventually make their way to the back, since Ali thought it wisest to approach Tae Yang when Top was present. When they made it to the back, they again found themselves watching Top yell at a girl. This girl, however, was a girl Ali had never seen before. The girl?s eyes had grey bags and her hair looked a mess, half falling out of the updo it was fashioned in. Right as Ali came within ten feet of the scuttle, Top slapped the girl hard with the back of his hand. The girl gave him a snide remark as the back of her hand came to touch her bloody lip.
   ?What the fuck?!? Ali heard another man?s voice shout from nearby. None other than the drug dealer G-Dragon came marching forward looking angry at what was happening.
   ?Tell that coke whore to never, ever, touch me!? Top said, pointing a finger at the girl who was now staring at the blood on the back of her hand.
   ?Fuck you!? G-Dragon spat out as he helped the girl up. ?Go fuck yourself, man! This is my girlfriend! You can beat up all these hoes you have, I don?t give a shit, but don?t you ever lay a finger on my girl!?
   ?Maybe you should stop fucking my girls and keep an eye on your coke whore!? Top said.
   ?Don?t touch me!? the girl said, swatting G-Dragon?s protective arms away from her.
   ?Clean up this mess or I?ll have your skank girlfriend thrown out of here,? Top sneered.
   ?She ain?t no skank!? G-Dragon said, stepping up closely to Top?s face. ?Never call my girl a skank!?
   ?I?ll call a skank a skank when I see one!? Top replied. ?She had her filthy hands down my pants, and I think that?s what skanks do. She wasn?t even putting up a price. You can?t fuck her right so she came to a real man, charge free, for a good fuck.?
   G-Dragon sputtered some incoherent words before trying to jump on Top with his fist raised, but some men came forward and restrained him.
   ?Yeah!? Top said as he walked away with Ting?s hand in his own. ?That bitch was begging me to fuck her. Good thing I don?t fuck just any slut in sight.?
   ?No,? G-Dragon shouted to Top?s back, ?you just slap her around and take her money!?
   ?Go sleep with Fefa,? Top said, ?and then give your money to Lady Larissa when you?re done. I collect your money, not Fefa?s.?
   Fefa, who stood nearby, seemed a bit embarrassed as G-Dragon?s girlfriend was glaring at her.
   ?Asshole,? his girlfriend muttered as she swayed her way out of the place. Ali wondered if it was wise to let the girl off on her own, but was relieved to see G-Dragon follow the girl.
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For those of you who don't know who Guti is/what he looks like:

*hotlinked the photo from Google search*
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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Oct.26 Chapter 4 Update)
« Reply #33 on: 11 November 2008, 22:51:19 »
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMGAH, FATHER GUTI! Haff fun, Jessy!

Ew, GD ::lol:: At least I was saved by the bell  ::lol:: why do Fefa's words ?Why you are with her, I don?t understand,? sound jealousy to me? Dont make me be with GD, please :'(

hahaha crackwhore!Chee makes an appearance at last!

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« Reply #34 on: 11 November 2008, 23:00:50 »
I had the same reaction as Fefa reading the first paragraph, HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH GUTI! I can't wait to see how Jessy reacts to lines like "She laughed as he sucked gently on her earlobe." hahahahaah.

Awww how...sweet?, GD is standing up for his girlfriend, never would've thought that. And TOP is such an ass beating her up like that :'( Chee couldn't resist some TOP could she. ::lol:: When TOP and GD were yelling at each other the fight scene in Haru Haru kept playing in front of my eyes and I couldn't help but laugh because they look so ridiculous "hitting" each other  ::lol::

Can't wait for moar! Update soon!

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« Reply #35 on: 11 November 2008, 23:05:14 »
Yeah the Haru Haru scene was playing in my head as I was writing their argument out. ::lol::

Jessy's going to have Chee walk in on Micky and Eva having sex in her fic after she read this. ::lol:: I expect it. :'(

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« Reply #36 on: 11 November 2008, 23:33:05 »
YOU ARE SO DEAD

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« Reply #37 on: 11 November 2008, 23:34:00 »
HAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHHA

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« Reply #38 on: 11 November 2008, 23:35:30 »
::lol:: Bring it on Jessy.

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« Reply #39 on: 11 November 2008, 23:44:45 »
Not this update, but wait for see.

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« Reply #40 on: 11 November 2008, 23:59:50 »
Oh I will. As if I was hoping for you to be kind to me anyway.

And I quote "I started the fic to torture you, but then you ended up liking Micky."

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Re: T.O.P. of the World (Nov.11 Chapter 5 Update)
« Reply #41 on: 12 November 2008, 00:13:47 »
Micky is nowhere near as disturbing as GUTI

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« Reply #42 on: 12 November 2008, 00:16:37 »
Oh and what is Gattuso?

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« Reply #43 on: 12 November 2008, 00:22:09 »
Sexy :P j/k

That fight scene... Haru Haru! ::lol:: But Chee! Don't put your hands on Top! He could be infectteddddd! *shudders* ::lol:: j/k And besides, Ting won't like you pushing up on her man :P ::lol::

So bump soon!

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« Reply #44 on: 12 November 2008, 00:26:02 »
I'm not the one that had dreams of being Gattuso's sex slave