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pukers808

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 3 posted 1/27
« Reply #15 on: 4 February 2009, 23:36:40 »

Short update this time around.

Chapter 4







?Yes Micky? Do you have a reason that you are calling me at this moment?? Chee whispered.

?You?re stalking TOP again aren?t you?? the voice on the other side responded.

?No I?m not!? she whispered again.

?The fact that you are whispering, tells me that you are.?

?Well so what if I am?? Chee asked. ?I?m not doing anything wrong.?

?Oh contraire, you are breaking the law, and plus, it?s creepy.?

?Oh shut up you!? she exclaimed.

TOP heard her and turned around. She widened her eyes and looked down to avoid his eyes. He was strangely attractive, she couldn?t figure out why she was so attracted to him. It was probably because he was so mysterious, no one really knew anything about him. He was a college student, who basically glided along, he was pretty popular because he was so good looking. He was Yunho?s best friend, but there were so many rumors surrounding why they weren?t friends anymore, that no one really knew what the real story was. But Chee didn?t care, she knew that there was a caring, kind person behind all of that rough exterior.

He chuckled to himself. He knew about Chee stalking him for quite some long time now. Micky had told him, and he thought it was kinda cute. But he wasn?t about to date her. He liked being single, he didn?t like dealing with emotional side of relationships. He gave her a little wave and a side smile and walked to his dorm.

Micky was in the same boat as Jae. He wanted to tell Chee how he felt, but he knew that she was too busy stalking TOP. He didn?t understand her fascination with him, but he knew that TOP was all wrong for her. But how was he supposed to tell her that she was wrong without getting her angry? Maybe he should call into the radio show that he always listens to. Maybe they would have advice.

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Junsu whistled to himself as he cleaned the table tops of his father?s pizza shop. It was a slow day, so he could go around and sing to himself while cleaning. Everyone that worked there thought that he should enter into a singing contest, but Junsu never thought he was good. He was happy working in his dad?s shop as he went to college.

?Junsu! Did you hear on the radio?? Jaejoong walked in, excited. ?There is going to be a contest and the winner is going to get 5,000 dollars! You could use that as your tuition money for college.?

?And what am I going to do in the contest??

?Sing, duh.?

?No, that?s okay, I don?t think I would try out for the contest.?

?Ah come on dude! You have talent, do not tell me that you seriously want to wait tables for the rest of your life!??

?Well, no--?

?Then try out for the contest! What?s the worse that could happen? You lose? So what? At least you tried.?

?I dunno, I?ll think about it.?

?Too late, I already submitted your name into the contest.? Jae said with a grin.

?WHAT??!!!?

?Yup, you heard me, you?re in.?

?Thanks a lot Jae.? Junsu replied rolling his eyes.

?You?re welcome, you know that everyone wants you to do this, don?t worry, you?ll do great.?

?I hope your right.?

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roonalda_manutd1007

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #16 on: 5 February 2009, 01:03:30 »
Ooh yess Mickje, call the station :D

::lol:: Chee stalking T.O.P XD

This made absolutely no sense *feils* but i hope you update soon :)

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #17 on: 5 February 2009, 09:20:06 »
*facepalm* I am stalking Top and he knows it. I'm so pathetic. Micky should just conebone me. I'll forget all about Top *ehe. Aww I can see Junsu working for dad and singing. I hope he wins the contest! Update sooner next time!

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #18 on: 7 February 2009, 00:24:02 »
For some reason when I was writing it, I could totally see Chee stalking TOP. ::lol::

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #19 on: 7 February 2009, 10:21:34 »
The sad thing is, I can imagine Chee being a creeper like that. HAHAHAHAHAHA. It's ironic that MIDKEY is the one telling Chee she's a creeper. ::lol::

Pizzaboy Joonsue...suddenly I am reminded of Pizzaboy Cesc. Am not sure if this is good or bad thing.

UPDATE SOONER PLZ. ;D

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #20 on: 7 February 2009, 13:53:28 »
:'( you guys are so mean. I wouldn't stalk TOP! Well maybe I would but you are still mean.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #21 on: 8 February 2009, 21:45:21 »
HA! See, you would! Calling us mean ::) Pssh. ::lol:: We only speak the truf.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #22 on: 9 February 2009, 19:44:36 »
:'( you're so mean. Anyway, where is the update? I want to find out what happens to everyone. Oh jaa we got our computer back and appearantly we need to buy a new hard drive so I might get intenets back soon. And that is a reason for you hurry up and update. Because when I do I'll bother you even more.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #23 on: 9 February 2009, 22:23:09 »
Sorry, I've been busy. ::lol:: I'll try and update as soon as I can. lol

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 4 posted 2/4
« Reply #24 on: 11 February 2009, 08:45:19 »
Har you are peepz, an updizzle.






Chapter 5






Pua turned to see Changmin standing there looking at her intently. ?Changmin, what are you doing here?? she asked still recovering from her ride. She knew that she never told him that she horseback rided.

?Your mum told me that you where here, I need to talk to you.? he responded.

Damn her mother. This was the one place that she could come to clear her head and now he knew about her riding. ?What about? Is it about the radio show?? she asked as waved over a stable boy.

?Well, yes and no.?

?So???.? she said walking towards an empty run down barn.

?Well, I was thinking, what if I did some of the shows where I gave the advice instead of just helping? I think I proved a lot to you. You know that you can trust me.? he said as they sat down inside the barn.

She leaned back and looked up at the sunlight that was peeking through some of the slits between the wooden slabs and closed her eyes. The warmth felt so good. ?You want to do some shows? Fine. You can do two that are coming up. And if you do well, I?ll think about maybe letting you alternate with me on the show.?

?Really??

?Yes.? she said with her eyes still closed.

He didn?t say anything, just leaned down and kissed her on her lips. Her eyes flew open and widened. She pushed him away instinctively and stared at him. ?What are you doing??

?Showing you my gratitude.? he said huskily reaching for her again.

?So you think now that I will sleep with you? I don?t think so.? she spat out as she got up.

He grabbed her hand as she was trying to walk away and she froze. A shiver went up her spine as she felt him stand up and wrap his arms around her. He didn?t say a word. They stood there in silence for what seemed like forever. He began kissing her earlobe and kissing her neck. She didn?t know what to do, so she stood there still frozen in her place. He turned her around to face him and kissed her on the lips. He nibbled them lightly making her whine softly. He pulled both of them down on the hay and began to undo her blouse that she was wearing. She could feel the cool air settle around her skin making her have goose bumps.

?Changmin.? She gasped.

He kept kissing her body, and she shivered and let out a sigh. It had been so long since she had someone touch her the way he was touching her. ?Changmin, please.? she pleaded.

?Shh.? he whispered as he laid her down on the straw that was on the floor. He looked at her from above and felt a rush go through his body. Her black hair glittered, her pale skin shone in the sunlight as her chest moved up and down from her breathlessness. Her skin was soft as he planted kisses going down her body towards her belly button. He took her right leg in his hands and removed her riding boot and did the same with her left foot. He then pulled down the pants that she wearing, so she was completely naked in front of him. She watched as he removed his clothing, staring at his chest through hazy eyes. Once he was finished, he leaned down and started kissing her again. Instead of pushing him away, this time she placed her hands on his back and urged him closer. He placed his hand on her hip and positioned himself between her legs. His lips left hers and he leaned back up to slowly enter her. They stared into each other?s eyes as he did it and she gasped but never took her eyes off his. He started to slowly move inside of her, and she closed her eyes to feel the pleasure that was inside of her. She made little soft noises as he thrust inside of her harder and deeper. He reached out and touched her breast and rubbed the nipple. She arched her back so she filled his hand completely. She lifted her legs and wrapped them around his hips. It made him be inside of her even more deeper and he was shocked by her move. She could feel her body becoming ready for the release, and just when she was starting to reach it, he lifted her and had her sit on his lap. She cried out, but let him guide her and her movement. Her hands flew to his hair as she grabbed on and he began kissing her again. She felt the pressure again building up and moved faster to reach it. He leaned onto his back on the straw on the floor and let her move on top of him. She finally burst and cried out his name as she shattered. He followed suit soon after and they laid there, her on top of him, trying to recover from what had just happened.


He ran his fingers through her hair that was damp with sweat from their love making. He had never felt like this for any of the girls that he dated before. None of them were really a challenge. He always felt like something was missing from those relationships and he finally knew why. There was never that friction between him and those girls. He got excited whenever he and Pua fought, even if it was play fighting. She looked up at him and saw he had a far away look in his eyes.

?Thinking much?? she asked.

?Hm? Oh, no, just in my own thoughts.? he replied with a smile.

?Ah.? she said laying her head back down onto his chest.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 5 posted 2/10 WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT
« Reply #25 on: 12 February 2009, 00:15:57 »
Ooh, thex so early? It's not good to mix business with pleaseure but what the hey :P this was hot lol

Update soon!

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 5 posted 2/10 WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT
« Reply #26 on: 12 February 2009, 11:10:57 »
Hahaha! I know! Changmin and Pua obviously are sexually frustrated so they had sex so fast. I think they might regret it once their actual personal and professional lives collide.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 5 posted 2/10 WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT
« Reply #27 on: 12 February 2009, 11:26:59 »
Hey don't hate. lol. Just kidding. There is going to be drama, I can smell it. Lol.

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Re: Bonafied Loving. Chapter 5 posted 2/10 WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT
« Reply #28 on: 7 March 2009, 10:58:32 »
Sexxxxxxxxxxxxxx!!! Naughty girl pua!! Haha

Update chica!!