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Author: pukers808
Rating: R, but could be NC-17 later.
Category: Gothic Fiction
Length: Full Length Fic
Summary: Saori loses her family and is forced to marry if she wants to keep the money that her family has. The story is derived from the Gackt video, ?Mizerable?, which is also the name of this fic. Click here to see video:
Disclaimer:
1) TOTALLY FICTION! So please don?t go out and start yelling at people or anything crazy.
2) © pukers808 2009
Characters: (I will add more characters as the story progresses)

Shiryu Shun


Saori Kido
I'm using this pic for now, til I find a better one



Hideki Shun




« Last Edit: 20 September 2009, 03:54:50 by pukers808 »

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......Sept. 7
« Reply #1 on: 7 September 2009, 22:17:17 »
She sat there still trying to wrap her head around what happened. Both of her parents were dead, killed by some of sickness that she never knew they had. Guests came in and out of the room that she was sitting in, but she was so wrapped up in her own world that half of the time, she was in another place. She looked down to the tissue that was in her black laced gloved hands and saw tears splattering onto the fabric. She was crying so much that she didn?t even know when the tears started to fall. In the background, Saori heard a carriage pull up to the mansion, but didn?t pay any attention, she was still thinking about her parents. Her mother who was a caring, kind woman, who was still in love with her husband, even after thirty-two years of marriage. Her father, who was a strict man, she wasn?t close to, but he was a handsome man, who ran several funeral homes, was very successful, little did he know that he would plan his own funeral.

While Saori was contemplating about her parents, the doors swung open and the butler walked in and bowed. ?Presenting Lord Shiryu Shun, ma?am.?

She looked up and saw a very gorgeous man standing in front of her. He was wearing a black overcoat with a wide red collar. He also had on a white ruffled shirt, with black pants and boots. His hands were gloved. He had pale white skin, blue eyes, and brown hair. She couldn?t stop staring and soon realized that she was gaping and looked away, out the window.

?My Lady,? he said in a deep voice that sent shivers down her spine. ?I have something important to talk to you about.?

She nodded and he walked over to her. Even the way he walked, oozed sex appeal. She felt ashamed for watching him, but she couldn?t tear her eyes away from him.

?I have a statement from your father saying in the event that he passes away, you have to marry me.? he said nonchalantly.

Her head snapped up and grabbed the paper and she scanned over it quickly. There it was, her father?s handwriting, saying exactly what Shiryu had said. She couldn?t believe it. Her father never told her about this. It was like he knew he was going to die young. She suddenly felt dizzy and slid off the daybed that she was sitting on and onto the floor. Her black corseted dress pooled around her as she tried to grasp as to what was happening. There was a sudden bark, and in ran a fluffy tan and black ball, pouncing on Saori happily and trying to lick her face.

?Chibi, stop it.? she said, trying to regain control of the situation and of herself.

The dog sat and stared at Shiryu with her tongue hanging out, happy to see someone else that she can jump on and lick to death. She barked a small bark and went on her hind legs and licked his leg. Taken aback, he patted Chibi on the head and she barked again, happy to get a pat on the head. He smiled and fell in love with Chibi. She was the cutest puppy he had ever seen.

Saori saw that little scene out the corner of her eye and touched her heart, just a little bit. But her puppy was friendly with everyone. She had heard rumors about Shiryu, some said that he was a vampire, some others said he was a murderer. He had a dark aura around him, someone you couldn?t quite figure out. Someone who watch you, whatever you would be doing, like how he was now.

?You don?t really have much of a choice really.? his voiced boomed back into her head. He grabbed her left hand and brought it up to his waist and produced a ring. He placed it on her ring finger and kissed her hand lightly. ?You?re mine now.? he whispered. He walked out and left Saori with Chibi on the floor.

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......Sept. 7
« Reply #2 on: 9 September 2009, 20:50:13 »
Well, since no one is reading this, I guess I can amuse myself and keep posting updates on this fic. ::lol::






He walked to the parlor where the funeral was being held. There were already people that were sitting and talking and some were crying. He took off his gloves and sat in the back. He crossed his legs and watched everyone with hooded eyes. Whenever someone came by to say hello, he would simply nod. He was detached from funerals because of what happened to his parents. The same that had happened to Saori?s. They both died a mysterious death, from some kind of disease. From that time on, he didn?t like any social gathering, let alone funerals.

The butler walked in and announced, ?Lady Saori Kido.? She walked in with her head tilted up, as if she was trying to appear strong, but in her eyes you could see that she was deathly afraid. Even more so now that she was supposed to marry a man she didn?t know, and the rumors didn?t help. He couldn?t help but chuckle softly. She seemed to glide down the aisle, her black dress flowing as she walked. Her style was very unique. She had on a black satin puffy sleeved shirt with a black corset over it, and her black skirt was tiered all around, her arms were incased in black lace gloves, her black hair was down, one side pulled away from her face and had a thin black veil covering her face. She was petite, but had a body of a sultry woman. Her dark features were complimented by her slighty tan skin. She sat in the front, with her aunt.

The funeral was not as long as he thought it would be. It was simple, for a couple that was just as simple. It was a nice ceremony, not lavish or overboard, which Shiryu thought was refreshing.

?There is one announcement to make, lords and ladies.? the priest said loudly. ?At the behest of her father, Saori is to marry Lord Shiryu.?

There was gasps from around the room, which delighted him. The whispers started and people started to turn and look at him. He simply gave them a smile. He could see her stiffen, as if she was paralyzed by some spider bite. ?Please give good wishes to the couple.? the priest said.

?Well, you really have outdone yourself this time eh?? a voice said behind him.  He turned to his so called manservant, which he viewed as a friend more than a servant.

?You know, Kazuko, I always get what I want.? he replied.

?And right now, you want her.?

?Her father didn?t object. He relished at the marriage.?

?At what price? Both you and I know that you can never love. You don?t have that emotion.?

?Who said you had to be in love to marry??

?And all these people??

?Who cares? It?s not like I live on what people think of me.?

?Very true.? Kazuko murmured.

Shiryu watched as Saori made the rounds to thank everyone and walked into the living room. She was his, and he wasn?t going to let go without a fight.

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......update Sept. 9
« Reply #3 on: 10 September 2009, 07:06:40 »
 :D isn't Chibi you're bebe? Aww I love lil'dogs.

and her dad being a coroner and then dying is pretty ironic in itself,  ::lol:: Is my morbid humor? because I kinda giggled to myself.

I wonder how she'll take to her father's final wishes for her to be an heir to his money?

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......update Sept. 9
« Reply #4 on: 10 September 2009, 20:56:39 »
Lol, I was laughing myself actually that her father died and was a mortician. But I guess I have weird humor too. ::lol::

We'll have to see, if she takes it the right way or the wrong way.

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......update Sept. 9
« Reply #5 on: 12 September 2009, 23:07:55 »
Morticians can't avoid death upon themselves, glad we got that out of the way as soon as this fic started. ::lol:: Mysterious deaths, arranged marriages, oh MY! This sounds like it could straight out of a manga. ROFL Gackt <3 is so gorgeous. Will stop fangirling. Hope you update soon Pua. *alixface*

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Re: New fic.....MIZERABLE......update Sept. 9
« Reply #6 on: 20 September 2009, 03:54:02 »
okay okay, since Chee threw a tantrum, I come with a updizzle. JK about chee having a tantrum.







The wedding ceremony was unbelievably short. No one was invited, it was only Shiryu, Saori, and Kazuko, his butler and the priest, of course. He gave her a small chaste kiss on her forehead and left her until now. She had dinner in her room, too nervous to eat, knowing what was coming up next. She laid on the bed for a little while, but was too nervous to stay in one position for too long. She got up and walked over to the chair that was in front of her vanity and sat down. The candles flickered with the motion of the wind. She felt like they could sense what was going to happen.

?Maybe he?s not coming tonight.? she though to herself. But as she thought that. The door opened  and he stood there in a dark red, velvet robe. His hair shining as he walked toward her. She suddenly felt very naked even though she was wearing a nightgown.

She was nervous, this was her first time being in bed with a man. He came up behind her, his robe already off, she could see his chest and the muscles that were there. She felt a sudden tingle all over her body. He moved her hair that was on her shoulder and kissed her neck. She closed her eyes and breathed in slightly. His kisses were light, getting her ready for what was coming next.

He made her stand up, facing him and he disrobed her. She stood there, naked, wanting to cover up, but couldn?t. The fire light danced over the curves of her body as he looked at her. He had a hungry look on her face, as if he hadn?t been with a woman in several years. Which was partly true. He puller her arms away from her chest, and pulled her into him. With their bodies touching, he let his hand roam over her back, down to her buttocks, and up to her back of her neck. He pulled her head to his hand kissed her on the lips. She sighed against his lips. Her lips were very soft. He deepened the kiss and walked backward toward the bed. He fell backward, and she fell on top of him. She could feel his member rubbing against her thigh.

He grabbed her wrists and held them up above her head. Her eyes widened as she saw the look in his eyes. He wanted to devour her. He must be a demon, she thought. He placed himself between her legs and thrusted inside of her. She cried out in pain, and he stopped, letting her body get used to him being inside of her. Once she relaxed he started thrusting again, causing friction, and a feeling that she?s never felt before. One of his hands left her wrists, and roamed over her breasts and down to her hip. She instinctively wrapped her legs around his waist and he smiled devilishly. She let out a short moan, and that made him go harder. She grabbed his hand that was at her waist and brought it up to her breast. She was a little devil. She felt that feeling get bigger and bigger until she couldn?t take it anymore and shattered. She grabbed the bed sheets and arched her back as she cried out his name as she felt her release. He gave one last thrust and froze above her as he got his release. He let out a short moan as he felt her relax her body once again underneath him. He slipped out of her and laid next to her. Her body was still buzzing while they laid there. She felt the cold air hit her and began to shiver. He pulled her close and held her until she got warm again. She fell asleep and had no nightmares that night.


He was accustomed to making love to woman and having no feelings while doing it, but for some reason, he felt empty after, like it was wrong that he didn?t put his heart into it. He looked over at Saori sleeping in the bed, her breathing labored, the soft curve of her bosom moving with her breathing. He tore his gaze away, for he realized that he was hard again and got up out of bed. He slipped his robe back on and called for his butler to come and dress him in the library.

?Did my lord have a good night, last night?? Kazuko asked nonchalantly as he helped Shiryu slip on his overcoat.

?Yes, I did.? was his only reply. He focused on buttoning his cuffs so that Kazuko wouldn?t ask him anymore questions.

?You have a letter milord--?

?So put it with the other letters.?

?It?s from your younger brother, Hideki.?

Shiryu snorted. He knew what his brother wanted. Money. Money for gambling. At least he didn?t have to worry about Hideki stealing his wife, since he was attracted to men.

?Alright, let me see the letter.?

There was a sudden knock on the door, and Kazuko opened it, only to see Saori standing there in a black high collared frilled shirt with a black corset and a black drop tiered full skirt on. Her hair was tied back into a chignon,  her dark eyes alert.

?My lady.? he said startled. ?You look stunning.?

?I?m wearing all black, how stunning could I look??

?I?m sorry, of course my lady.? he bowed.

?No, I?m sorry, I didn?t mean to snap at you.? she sighed.

?No need for apologies ma?am.?

?Could you tell me where the library is??

?This is the library, but it?s more of my lord?s office. There is another smaller one down the hall.?

?Oh. Oh, thank you, Kazuko.? she said as she was turning to leave to go to the other library.

?But--I suggest you use this one, it has more books I think you would enjoy.?

?But it?s Shiryu?s office.?

?I don?t think he?d mind.?

?Um, alright, are you sure??

?Yes. Come.? Kazuko waved over to her, telling her to follow him inside.

?Kazuko, I don?t need you, you can go.? Shiryu said not looking up from his desk.

?Sorry sir, but m?lady wanted to check out the library.?

His head snapped up and he watched Kazuko hold her by the hand and direct to her to the wall behind him. She avoided looking at him, trying to look at the books, seeing of she could find anything interesting to read. He took her in, what she was wearing. She did look stunning for someone wearing black. He felt a stirring, and quickly looked away from her. The last thing he needed was to fall in love with his wife. He only married her because he needed an heir.

She picked a book she thought she would like and quickly left the library without looking back. She could feel his gaze on her, it was so intense that she knew if she looked at him she would have gotten hurt, from a book falling on her. It was better if she used the small library from now on.

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 ::lol:: Well Well Well.

 8) he may just like her... :o But only for an heir!!! What a pig. :P

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What can I say? Men are pigs!  ::lol::

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 ::lol:: if men are pigs, it wont be long until they can fly. ::lol::