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The Hunger Games. [C H A P T E R : 10] (:
« on: 1 May 2011, 02:08:06 »

Author: TawneeVillaBaybee

Rating: PG13. Maybe Rated R because of the killing.

Category: Fiction.

Characters: Different Soccer players.

Length: Long.

Summary: The cold wind blew as everyone in the district waited. Waited to know who would go & who would stay. Afraid that it could be one of them. I feared only for my family. It would hurt me more to watch a loved one get sent to that horrible place. Where only one survives. Where one has to fight against everyone & everything. Where the only rule was to stay alive. They were the dreaded yearly games?the Hunger Games.

Beta: Word.

Disclaimer: I do not own the book ?The Hunger Games?. I just really like the story & thought I should do it footballer style. I also might change some of the events in the story. It won?t be exactly the same as the Hunger Games series.

Authors Notes: I read the Hunger Games series & became obsessed with it. So, I thought I?d combine it with something else I really enjoy?Footballer Fanfics.

Please apply for the story. (: I need 12 girls. If more apply, I will find a way to get you into the story.

Applications are in "Beta and Casting" thread. (:
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« Reply #1 on: 1 May 2011, 06:55:31 »
im excited :D

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #2 on: 1 May 2011, 07:46:01 »
Chapter 1: Game Day.

Characters: Margo & Sergio.


I woke up knowing today was the day. The day of the games.

The games we?re something the government of my country, Menap, came up with when we our ancestors attempted to rebel & overthrow them over 70 years ago. The games were our punishment. That is how they showed us how powerful they were.

Menap is divided into 12 districts. There used to be a 13th but it was destroyed by Government City many years ago.

Every year, a boy & a girl from each district is chosen by a lottery to participate in the Hunger games. The ?tributes?, as Government City calls them, have to be ages 13-18. Once two tributes from each district are chosen, they are sent off to Government City where they enter an arena. A place where only one of them gets out alive?

The games last weeks or until there is only one person left standing.
The games begin with all 24 tributes surrounding the cornucopia. The cornucopia is full of weaponds, supplies, food, fire starters, first aid, etc. As soon as they hear the signal, the tributes rush to get whatever they can & fight for whatever they need.

In the games, trust no one.

Its survival of the best & only the best win. Only the best know how to stay alive. It also depends on being charismatic. The games are broadcasted on live TV for every district to watch. If you are a crowd favorite, you receive survival rewards. This assures you will last at least longer than others in the arena.

I got out of bed knowing I might lose one of my friends, maybe someone really close to me. Or maybe even myself.

?May the Lord be with you & guide you.? Was the slogan of the Hunger Games because if you were chosen, you better pray God was on your side.
I walked into the kitchen where I saw my younger sister eating and my mother making my breakfast. ?Hurry up, Margo! You know we have to be at the lottery today.? My mother seemed nervous. She feared for my sister & I.

I responded, ?I?m not hungry, mother. Lets just head off to the lottery. Its just about to start & it?s a ten minute walk.? She asked me, ?Are you sure?? I looked at her, the worry in her face made her seem tired. Also, she overworked  herself to pay the bills. ?Mother, I?m sure. I hate eating the day of the games. It makes me feel really sick.?

She nodded & we headed out the door. This was the last time I?d see my mother & sister in a long time.

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?Margo Bane!?

As I heard my name through the speakers, I froze. I never thougt I?d get chosen. I mean, what were the odds of ME getting pulled out of a box with over one thousand names in it?

?Come on over, Margo.? Said the Mayor of District 8 through the microphone. As I walked to the stage, people just stared & I looked back at my mother. Her eyes were red & there were tears in her eyes.

It pained me to see her that way so I tried not to cry, I didn?t want her to see how afraid I really was.

The mayor walked over to the box & said, ?Now its time to pick our boy tribute.? He stuck his hand in the box & pulled out a strip of paper. His eyes widened in shock as he read the name, ??Sergio Canales.?

Sergio Canales was his son.

Sergio walked calmly up to the stage & whispered to his father, ?Don?t worry about me, dad. I play soccer, I can run.? And he half smiled at him. He didn?t want to worry his father.

I didn?t know him very much. He was a popular guy at my school and he played soccer. I was one of those girls who wasn?t invisible, but also wasn?t completely over the top popular.

He stood next to me & smiled, ?Hey, I?m Sergio. & You are Margo, right??

I replied, ?Right now isn?t the time to be social, ?Boy Tribute?.? He seemed almost shocked at my reply. He probably expected me to act all gaga just like all the other girls at school.

?You know, that was rude. I am hurt. I was just trying to make this less difficult for you. I?m sure this isn?t easy to deal with, ?Girl Tribute?.?, He smirked as he did air quotes.

I glared at him even though I kind of wanted to smile. He was being really calm about this whole Might-Not-Make-Out-Alive deal. He was also attempting to make me smile & I really appreciated it.

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I kissed my mother goodbye & set off for Government City with Sergio in his father?s car. I was very afraid that I?d never see my family again, but at the same time I was glad my sister didn?t get chosen.
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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #3 on: 1 May 2011, 08:19:14 »
Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing your own adaptation of this. :)

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #4 on: 1 May 2011, 11:25:06 »
This looks SO good. Really wanna read more soon.

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #5 on: 1 May 2011, 16:56:11 »
ooohhh this is so awesome!
You really nailed my personality perfectly.
I can only hope that things go semi-well for Sergio and I lol
update soon, this chapter was awesome!

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #6 on: 1 May 2011, 19:06:38 »
This sounds exciting! :P
Can't wait for the next!
It's big of Margo to be happy that her sister didn't get chosen, because many could get selfish in that situation!:P

Anyway, update soon. <3

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #7 on: 1 May 2011, 19:47:34 »
Fuck, I love this series so much. YOU MADE ME SO HAPPY, WRITING A FANFICTION OF IT.
Those books are amazing, and I bet this will be amazing.
God girl, you're a good writer and I'm all excited and needy for more, please update soon, yeah?

I am so worried about Margo. And Sergio, too. I like 'em both. :(
She's so super cute. And I love all those little details you choose, Tawnee. You're such a good writer :)
Is this your first story? I'd like to read more of you (:

Wow, oh my god. I love this.
So much.
Already.

Just update. Please :]

xoxo
Miana ♥

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #8 on: 2 May 2011, 00:44:11 »
Author Replies:

Gypsy Tea: Thank you so much for commenting AND applying. I really like The Hunger Games series & I am really looking forward to writing this. (:

Meroca: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the support. (:

Margo: I?m glad you liked it. (: Things will get better for you & sergio. Hopfully. LOL. You two were the first to get chosen for the games so far. Heh. (: I hope you keep reading. Thank you for the support.

Camila7: I know. Just writing it makes me excited. (: Also, thank you for wishing me a happy birthday yesterday. I really appreciated it.

Leanielsen: Thank you for applying. (: & I know. Margo is a very unselfish character in this story. Always putting others before herself.

Mianapique: I?m glad you liked it. & I am just so fucking OBSESSED with the series. I had to combine it with sexy soccer players. (: Heh. Thank you so much for your support. This IS my first story. (: I?m so glad I?m getting so much support from a lot of you.

Thank you all so much for all this support. (: I also really appreciate that you all applied. (: I would really like to get to know you girls better so we can all be friends. (: The next chapter will be posted later today. If not, tomorrow afternoon. Again, thank you so much. You are the greatest. (: <3

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Re: The Hunger Games. [Chapter 1]
« Reply #9 on: 2 May 2011, 02:57:22 »
Chapter 2: The Chosen 24.

Margo & Sergio.


We arrived at Gov City. It was so luxurious, it almost seemed unreal. It was paradise in comparison to where I lived.

District 8 was great if you loved the outdoors, which I did. I lived right next to The Wild. But Gov City was beautiful. Buildings & city lights were everywhere. We parked in front of the arena?s hotel. This was where Sergio & I had to wait until all the tributes arrived.

?Nice place, eh?? Sergio laughed. It was a sound that made me feel safe if only for a few seconds.

I punched him in the arm & half smiled, ?Shut up. This isn?t funny. Doesn?t it worry you that you might not survive this??

We got out of the car & walked inside. There, a receptionist took one look at us & said, ?Follow me.?
She walked us through a dark hallway with creaky floor boards & six rooms on each side. Each door had a number. She stopped in the hall & asked us, ?District??

Sergio, still being very calm about the whole thing, replied, ?District 8, ma?am. Can we get some food brought to us? We just got here from very far away &?? The woman turned around & walked away without saying anything more to us.

Sergio made a face of shock. The same face he made when I was rude to him at the lottery.

?Did she just walk away from me? This is just great. I try to lighten things up a bit & suddenly all women hate me.? He opened the door labeled ?D8? & walked over to a bed with an old matress on it. I closed the door behind me & sat next to him. There was something about him right then & there, that I just couldn?t help myself.

I burst out laughing.

Not a quiet laugh either. It was a full-on hysterical laugh. Sergio just stared at me like there might be something wrong with me. I kept laughing & after about five minutes, I tried catching my breath, ?I?m?so sorry?Sergio.? I laughed again, ?I really don?t mean to laugh at you?I don?t know what?s wrong with me.?

He seemed to think about it & finally said, ?You know, it WAS pretty funny.? Then he started laughing with me.


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Jack & Alyssa.


As Jack & I sat on the old matress, not saying a word to each other, we heard something.

A laugh, maybe?

?Is someone laughing?? Jack seemed confused. At eighteen years of age, you?d think I?d be traveling to other places. & I had been. But the government of Menap made it a rule that all teenagers 13-18 had to come back to their district for the Hunger games.

At least I was chosen to come with a guy I always had a crush on. Jack was a great guy. But he was seen by everyone as a player. He always had a girl by his side. Not girl friends though, just friends with priviledges. I always wondered why he never asked me though. He?d asked just about every girl in District One. Maybe he was just never into me or something, but I always secretly loved him.

His voice interrupted my thoughts, ?Hey, Alyssa.? He spoke again, ?I said ?Is someone laughing?? Do you hear the laughter? Or am I going crazy??

?No, Jack. You?re not going crazy. Yet. I hear it too. I think its coming from District 7?s room.? I replied.

?What could they possibly be laughing about??

?No idea.? Really. What could two tributes be laughing about? I didn't understand.

He stood up & opened the door. I followed him & walked across the hall. We listened for a few seconds & realized the laugher came from Districs 8?s room. We knocked on the door lightly & the laughter came to a stop, followed my the door opening slowly a minute later.

A boy & a girl about our age were there. The boy, who was blonde & very attractive said, ?Who are you??

Everything about him was attractive. He had green eyes that were beautiful. His hair was a bit long, it covered his eyebrows in a nice shade of dirty blonde.

I replied, ?We heard some laughter & came to check it out. I?m Alyssa.? I held out my hand to him & he shook it. I stared into his eyes & suddenly forgot that Jack was there.

Jack then grabbed me by the shoulders & pulled me away from him. He glared at me, ?Yes, Alyssa. Ok.? Then he turned to glare at the boy & said, ?Jack.?


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Camila & Cesc.


After hearing the laughs stop, Cesc & I decided to go out & check. There were a boy & a girl standing in the hallway. They were talking to the kids from District 8.

Cesc started walking towards them & I whispered, ?Cesc! Get over here. What are you doing??

Cesc just grinned & kept walking, ?Its nice to meet the enemy before one has to slaughter them. Don?t you think so, Camila??

He looked at the ones standing in the hallway & said, ?Fabregas, Cesc. & My partner is Camila. District two. You are?? The girl was dressed in nice clothes, she seemed like the rich type. Probably wouldn?t stand a chance in the arena.

She smiled politely at Cesc & replied, ?I am Alyssa & this is Jack. We?re from District One.?

Rich type.

I knew it. Distric One is the richest district.

?Ah. District one. Daddy couldn?t get you out of getting chosen?? He smirked.

?I?m just a regular person just like all of you. & Just like in all other Districts, anyone can get chosen.? She replied coldly.

She also seemed touchy about getting called rich. But if the boot fits, right?

I walked over & stood next to Cesc. The others, from District 8 didn?t seem like rich people. They actually seemed pretty humble. My type of people. I smiled at them, ?Hey. I?m Camila.? I completely ignored the two rich kids next to me.

The girl smiled back at me & said, ?Nice to meet you. I?m Margo & this is Sergio. District 8.? I gave them a light hug & smiled again, ?District 8. Cool. I?m from District 2.? Margo seemed like a really nice girl, I liked her.

?Come in, we can all talk inside.? Said Margo.

We followed her into the room & shut the door behind us. Margo asked, ?Do you know if any others have arrived??

?That I know of, Six, Twelve, Eleven & Four aren?t here yet.? Cesc & I were the second ones to arrive & we heard most of the others get here.

The only thing left to do was wait. The remaining Districts were on their way & the games were headed towards us. I saw these kids now as just people. But in the arena, I?d see them with different eyes. We?d all be blood thirsty & with the hope of surviving.

They?d become my enemy.

All of them.

Even my District partner, Cesc.



BTW. Castings are still open. & I need 4 more girls. So, please. (: If you are interested. Apply. It will be greatly appreciated.
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« Reply #10 on: 2 May 2011, 03:11:13 »
Wow. Margo and Sergio are going to be the first to do it... LOL. I loved it... and Jack. He is a player.

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« Reply #11 on: 2 May 2011, 03:26:57 »
Margo and Sergio are so cute together! Camila seems so cool. Ooh Jacks a bit of a player? Hope he doesnt hurt Alyssa!

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« Reply #12 on: 2 May 2011, 03:45:43 »
This sounds great :D
More soon please :-*

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« Reply #13 on: 2 May 2011, 03:51:38 »
I got fucking goosebumbs reading this.
"Even my district partner, Cesc."
Oh fuck, oh fuck, oh fuck.

Margo and Sergio are kind of, cute together. I like them, acutally. I like how you make Sergio up to be all used to women liking him. And how his reactions are when women just aren't. It's super cute.
And come on, that line ".... & suddenly all women hate me." GOD. HOW ADORABLE.
Tawnee, my baby, you pulled this shit of wonderfully. <3
I mean, Margo's laughing? Who'd come up with that? ;D Haha, el deu meu, afecete. This is brilliant.

Alyssa's secretly loving Jack? Oh preppy little love ;D
Jack's a player? Yeah, I thought so. But he got jealous when Alyssa's eyes couldn't leave Sergio's appearance. Haha, way too cute. I swear.

HERE COMES MY FAVORITE COUPLE. MI HIJA MILA. MI LINDA. MI AMOR.
I love my Mila so much, and seeing her with Cescy always makes me happy. I wish the best for both of 'em, even if we're all kinda enemies.
Mila and Cesc are my babes. I love how you made Camila. She's not a rude girl, but she's straight up honest and you proved that here.

I love you, Tawnee.
All those little details make this not only good, but fucking perfect, I swear. For example, Alyssa doesn't liked to be called a rich girl.
Jack's jealous. Cesc is cheeky. And Camila can deal with what she's in.

I loved this: "The woman turned around & walked away without saying anything more to us."
Because that shows that all the beauty of where they might stay at and the fame and love they might get is in vain. Because, this is dead serious. This is about their lives.
And their actual future. And all that glamour is a masquerade to beautify the bloody truth.


Wow, Tawnee. You are amazing, babe.
Since you just updated, I guess I gotta wait a bit for your next update. But I can't seem to wait. Because this is fucking great.
And I want more of it. I'm seriously craving it.

Do you think, you got an idea of your next update? Because I need to know. En serio, querida, o yo voy a convertirse en una chica muy muy muy loca.

T'estimo, afecte. ♥

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« Reply #14 on: 2 May 2011, 17:57:26 »
OMG I AM IN LOOOOOVE WITH THIS.

Your perspective is so interesting. I love that they're all interacting, and that we get a more in-depth view of the other Districts.

Every tribute pair introduced so far seem to work so well together. I'm really excited to read more, and to see how their relationships develop. I'm also, as grotesque as it sounds, eager to see who's killed first.

Looking forward to your next update! <3

P.S. It's no trouble at all. I'm actually giddy with how excited I am to see how my character fits into this all. If I can help in any other way please don't hesitate to ask :)