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Destino [UPDATED - February 12th]
« on: 19 June 2011, 00:21:38 »
Author: Tamara
Rating: R
Category: Romance, drama
Length: I don't know yet
Summary: For how long can you run from your destiny?
Beta: MSWord
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the other footballers mentioned in my story or their families. This is just fiction, not the reality.




Prologue

August 30th, 2009


Storms are unusual at this time of the year. It is late August and it was supposed to be hot and dry by now. But not today. Today it is pouring rain in Madrid and Maria Elena thinks that it couldn?t have been more appropriate. Unlike most of the people, the sound of rain and thunders and flashes of lightening in the sky always calm her down, and at this exact moment, that?s exactly what she needs. Something to ease her mind and her hearth, or else she thinks she?ll blow from all the emotions coursing through her body right now. She never knew why but thunderstorms always remind her of him.

Him.

The man her eyes are carefully watching from the stands. Watching him move around the pitch is like magic to her; her breath is caught in her throat and she feels hypnotized. Somewhere in back of her mind she knows she shouldn?t be here. Someone could recognize her and she can?t even imagine what the consequences would be if that really happens. But right now she doesn?t care. She?s not really paying any attention to the game and her gaze is fixed on him and him alone. It?s almost as if she?s trying to engrave every little detail of his in her memory. Cold raindrops and hot tears are blurring her vision, but she can still see him perfectly.
 
He?s different. Her head still spins just by looking at him but he?s no longer the boy she used to know. He?s a man now. A breathtaking man that should?ve been hers.

His brown hair and his beard give him a serious and mature appearance, and she can tell that his eyes don?t shine like they used to, just like hers. It kills her to know that the person she once loved the most is now a complete stranger to her. A complete stranger that she couldn?t be more proud of.

?He made it? she whispers to herself, smiling faintly as she dries uncountable tears with the back of her sleeve. She always knew he was going to be great. She was just a girl back then but she still knew it. And now here he was; making his debut as a Real Madrid player and being one of the top footballers in the world, his name already recognized as one of the greatest. In her eyes he was always the best. To see where he got in life and the things he achieved make her feel a little less guilty for the decisions she made in the past. Maybe if she had stayed around he wouldn?t be here today. Maybe her father was right and she could have never been part of this after all. Maybe it wasn?t meant to be.

She?s all drenched and her black hair is stuck to her head when the judge blows the final whistle, waking her from her daze and back to reality. And reality panics her. She needs to get out of there as soon as possible before someone sees her.

She holds her black leather jacket close to her chest and tries to make way across the white sea of fanatical madridistas. Her short frame makes it impossible for her to see where she?s going and she ends up being dragged by the crowd.

There isn?t enough air and she feels herself being suffocated by all those people, her nerves wreaking havoc in her body as she begins to feel claustrophobic dizzy. When she finally spots the exit and releases a relieved breath she feels a strong hand grabbing her arm and pulling her back. She slowly looks up though her long lashes, afraid of what she?s about to see and her eyes meet a familiar and face. 

 ?Gonzalo??

A/N: ;)




« Last Edit: 12 February 2012, 09:03:49 by Tamara Bueno »

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #1 on: 19 June 2011, 00:57:06 »
Sounds great :D

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #2 on: 19 June 2011, 02:21:34 »
Oh! I really like this. I love that I couldn't figure out who it was at all!

Please continue!

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #3 on: 19 June 2011, 06:07:17 »
Oh! I really like this. I love that I couldn't figure out who it was at all!


Same!

I really like this so far, can't wait to read more soon ;D

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #4 on: 19 June 2011, 07:34:04 »
oooooh gonzalo fic!  awesome start!  can't wait to see where this goes :)

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #5 on: 19 June 2011, 14:52:30 »
Yay for Gonzo.


I love him, even though he totally reminds me of someone I don't love at the moment ::)

But swooooooooooooon.

Love this already <3

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #6 on: 19 June 2011, 15:02:21 »
This looks great!! :-*

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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #7 on: 19 June 2011, 15:56:30 »
Please continue...

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Re: Destino [Chapter 1, June 19]
« Reply #8 on: 20 June 2011, 03:18:41 »
A/N: A huge thank you to the lovely ladies who commented, you are all amazing :) And I honestly wasn't expecting so many views, thank you! So I decided to continue, and here it goes chapter one! Hope you all like it! Comments= love ;)


Chapter 1


?What the hell are you doing here Maria Elena?? Gonzalo shouts, in an attempt to make himself heard in the middle of the crowd.

Maria?s eyebrows furrow in confusion and her eyes are wide in shock. She opens her mouth to speak but no words come out. Should she lie or should she tell the truth?
 
?Is Gloria here with you?? he asks, scanning the crowd behind her in search for his fiancée, her sister.

?No, no.? She blurts. ?She?s at home with mom and Sofia. And you can?t tell her that I came here tonight Gonzo. Please.? Her eyes plead with his.

He tilts his head to side, trying to figure what on earth is going on and why she?s hiding from her sister the simple fact of watching a Real Madrid?s match. It doesn?t make any sense.

The fans have already recognized him at this point, and there are dozens of them screaming at his side and trying to get autographs and pictures. He is always receptive towards his fans but today he?s going to ignore them. There is something desperate in Maria?s eyes and he knows that there?s something wrong about her being here. So he grabs her by the arm and drags her to the nearest door he can find, guiding her inside and shuts it behind them. She doesn?t protest. All those peoples around her are making her even more nervous than she already is.

?How did you find me?? She asks as soon as he closes the door and releases her arm.

?It doesn?t matter. Why are you here?? This time there is a worried and serious tone in his voice, and she knows that lying will be impossible now; he already knows that something isn?t right.

Maria leans her head against a wall, closes her eyes and takes a death breath, trying to calm her nerves a little. ?It?s complicated Gonzalo.?

?Does Iker know you?re here?? He questions, a little softer this time.

?Oh my God, Iker.? She thinks. Of course Gonzalo would think she was here because of Iker. He had asked for a few dates but it isn?t anything serious. He was amazing and like her mama likes to point out ?everything she needs in her life?. But that doesn?t mean that he is what she wants in her life. And that was absolutely clear for her tonight. She hadn?t come here for him, and he hadn?t crossed her mind until now. 

?Iker is not my boyfriend.? She answers, her eyes still shut. ?I don?t need to tell him where I am.?

Gonzalo nods and crosses his arms in front of his chest. ?I know that. But you guys went out on a few dates so I thought ? ?

?Don?t tell them.? She interrupts him, her voice lower than a whisper. She can feel her eyes watering and it takes all her might to keep the tears from falling. She takes a few steps in his direction and stands right in front of him. He looks deep into her eyes while she takes both his hands in hers.

?Please. Don?t tell Gloria or Iker or mom or anyone. Por favor.? She begs, and a lonely tear makes its way down her cheek.

?Maria I??

?I?ll tell you everything one day. Te prometo.? She interrupts him for the second time. She needs to make him cooperate with her. If her family, especially her mom, finds out that she came here tonight she knows that it will be too much for her to handle. It?s been a couple of months since she came back from Argentina and she doesn?t need all the drama back in her life yet. ?I can?t deal with this right now.?

Gonzalo ponders for a moment. He hates the idea that he?s going to have to lie to Gloria. They just got engaged and he knows that he shouldn?t do this but there?s something in Maria?s eyes, something he can?t figure out what it is but that is making him want to help her. He knows that this whole thing it?s important to her, he can feel it. And if a little omission it?s all that takes to keep her secret, than so be it.

?Alright?. He finally answers. Maria releases a relived breath and circles her arms around his neck.

?Gracias.? She thanks him while he hugs her.

?De nada. But I?m just doing this because you?re my favorite future sister-in-law.? He jokes, trying to ease some of the dramatic aura surrounding them.

Maria Elena laughs loudly and looks up at him with a half-grin on her face. ?Of course I am. The other one is a bitch.?

?Come on, she?s not that bad.? He tries to argue, but deep down he knows that there?s something bitchy about Gloria?s other sister, and that Maria is far from being her number one fan.

?Yes, she is.? She pouts. Gonzalo laughs and shakes his head.

?Do you want me to take you home?? He asks, despite knowing what she?s going to answer. If he takes her home Gloria and her mum will ask questions, and that?s not what they need given the circumstances.

?No. I?ll take a cab.? She smiles and he nods. ?I think I should go now.? He kisses her forehead and she walks towards the door. She half smiles at him and mouths a ?thank you? before disappearing in the crowd. Gonzalo is left behind wondering what on earth this girl is hiding and there is a voice in the back of his mind screaming that Real Madrid?s newest addition to the squad has something to do his with this whole drama.   

**

It?s already past midnight when Maria Elena gets home. She carefully unlocks the door to the second floor apartment she?s been sharing with her mother and sister for the past three months. The hallway is dark and apparently so is the rest of the apartment. There?s a deadly silence and Maria Elena keeps quiet, afraid that she?ll wake someone.

She takes off her heels and makes her way down the hall, the moonlight pouring through the living room window being her only guide. She opens the first door to her left without making a sound. The view in front of her lights up her face and she smiles. Right there, curled up in bed, wrapped in pink sheets and tightly holding her teddy bear, is her little angel.

Sofia.

Her four year old daughter is peaceful sleeping and Maria Elena feels a wave of peace wash over her as she looks at the little girl, instantly forgetting everything that happened earlier. Sofia always had this calming effect on her. She?s able to warm Maria?s heart with a single smile and her sweet voices gives all the strength Maria needs to keep going. Sofia is her sunshine, hers and no one else?s.

Maria walks towards the bed and sits right next to Sofia. She runs her fingers through the girl?s long black hair and kisses her forehead lightly. It amazes Maria Elena how much they look alike. Hair, lips, nose, skin color, even her little hands look like Maria Elena?s. Sofia?s brown colored eyes tell a different story tough; and Maria loves them.
 
?Dulces sueños mi amor.? She whispers and takes one last look at her daughters face before quietly standing up and leaving the room.

She decides to drink a glass of water in the kitchen before going to bed. She opens the fridge in search for a bottle of water and nearly jumps when she hears a low voice behind her.

?How was it??

?Shit, Gloria!? She curses. ?You scared me.?

Gloria is sitting in the kitchen counter, dressed in her pajamas and calmly eating an apple. Judging by her face and by her perfect ponytail Maria can tell that she wasn?t sleeping. She was still awake, waiting for Maria to get home.

Gloria ignores Maria?s reaction and repeats the question. ?How was it??

?How was it what?? Maria asks annoyed, pretending not to know what her sister is talking about. Of course Gloria knows where she had been. Gloria knew her like the back of her hand and Maria had been a fool when she thought that her little sister wouldn?t guess what she was up to.

Gloria laughs and bites her apple. ?I?m not stupid Maria. I know where you were.? Maria chooses to ignore her sister?s conversations and serves herself a glass of water.

?How amazing did he look like?? Gloria asks in a teasing tone and Maria decides that enough is enough. She places her glass in the counter a little stronger than she intended to and turns to look at her sister.

?Why are you doing this?? she asks seriously. ?It?s already hard enough. There is no reason for you to keep asking ridiculous questions.?

Gloria sighs and looks back at her. ?I?m sorry? She apologizes. ?I thought that if I joked a little it would help to ease the tension. I?m just the little sister, I?m not going to judge you.?

Maria?s face softens and she half smiles at her sister. Gloria would never say or do anything to hurt her. They are best friends since they?re little kids. Of course they have their stupid fights but they would stand next to each other through anything. They have a big family, really big, but most of the times it seems that it?s just Maria Elena and Gloria against the rest of the world.

Maria sits in the counter next to her sister and rests the back of her head against the cool wall.

?He looked like the walking definition of perfect.? She finally answers the question with a grin on her face, her voice lower than a whisper. Gloria smiles and turns her head to look at her sister. Maria is still smiling but Gloria can see the tears in her eyes and she finally understands how hard seeing him must have been. Instead of saying something she hugs Maria tightly against her chest and feels as her sister starts to sob. No words are spoken. Words are unnecessary at times like this. She lets her sister cry in her shoulder for as long as she wants to, and allows herself to wonder if someday Maria Elena will finally get the happiness that it was taken away from her.
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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #9 on: 20 June 2011, 03:30:53 »
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Re: Destino [Prologue June 18]
« Reply #10 on: 20 June 2011, 03:44:22 »
So amazing! I'm proper frustrated now though! Who is HE

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Re: Destino [Chapter 1, June 19]
« Reply #11 on: 20 June 2011, 20:16:38 »
This is amazing! I promise a better comment after the next chapter, but ILOVEIT! <3

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Re: Destino [Chapter 1, June 19]
« Reply #12 on: 20 June 2011, 21:53:57 »
Jeesh. I hate when we don't know who "he" is until half way through the story :(
But then again it takes a great writer to pull it off.
I LOVE THIS! Update por favor?

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Re: Destino [A/R June 21]
« Reply #13 on: 21 June 2011, 23:54:26 »
Hola chicas! So I finally had some free time and decided to write a proper Author's Replies :)
And the next chapter should be up by tonight, but if I decide to be a good student and actually study for my test it should be up tomorrow lol
Love you all, xoxo!

Author's Replies

Sounds great :D
Thanks for comment :)

Oh! I really like this. I love that I couldn't figure out who it was at all!

Please continue!
So amazing! I'm proper frustrated now though! Who is HE
Lol Frustration is not good girl, so I promise you'll find out who he is soon okay?! Thanks for comment :)
Oh! I really like this. I love that I couldn't figure out who it was at all!


Same!

I really like this so far, can't wait to read more soon ;D
Thanks for comment chica :)

oooooh gonzalo fic!  awesome start!  can't wait to see where this goes :)
Yay for Gonzo! And there will be other hot footballers involved too lol thanks for comment!

Yay for Gonzo.


I love him, even though he totally reminds me of someone I don't love at the moment ::)

But swooooooooooooon.

Love this already <3
I love him too, he's so cute! And there isn't enough Gonzo love around here! I wonder who he reminds you of?! lol Thanks for comment luv :)

This looks great!! :-*
;)

Please continue...
I will, thanks for comment :)

This is amazing! I promise a better comment after the next chapter, but ILOVEIT! <3
Thank you, I'm glad that you commented :)

Jeesh. I hate when we don't know who "he" is until half way through the story :(
But then again it takes a great writer to pull it off.
I LOVE THIS! Update por favor?
Lol You won't have to wait until half way through the story chica, I'm not that mean! You'll find out soon! Thanks for comment ;)

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Re: Destino [A/R, June 20]
« Reply #14 on: 22 June 2011, 02:30:26 »
And the next chapter should be up by tonight, but if I decide to be a good student and actually study for my test it should be up tomorrow lol




[whispers] Don't be a good student! Don't be a good student!

Nah, I'm only kidding. Unfortunately, we all know school comes first. [curse you school!]
Looking forward to the update, whether it's today or tomorrow. :D