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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #30 on: 21 August 2011, 06:27:21 »
So...I wonder why Miranda was so mean to me :'( Glad to see I can stand up for myself though :D I hope it'll be different with the rest of the WAGs.

I can understand why she wanted to see him. It's hard not to see someone for 8 years. Someone you love, even if they're just a best friend. But gah, Cristiano has such an awkward situation to handle. It's hard to trust someone you love so much when they're going to see someone they [used to] love so much!

I totally expected an engagement too ::lol:: but wow I feel bad for Tawnee now. Finally got our of her shell again and now the only person she has really talked to is moving to a different country.
Wonder if Tawnee will go with Margo...hmmm.

Love itttt. Can't wait for more! :D

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #31 on: 21 August 2011, 06:29:31 »
hi Tiffany!! ::lol:: :oops: :oops:  I realized you're the girl in the story hahaha I'm a little slow :(

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #32 on: 21 August 2011, 06:39:09 »
hi! :D Krista, right? and yesss I am the Tiffany in the story. ::lol::

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #33 on: 21 August 2011, 06:40:12 »
haha yeah I'm Krista... I realize how creepy I sound on this forum so much and I don't mean to be ::lol:: ::lol::

Just re-read this Mariyah! There was stuff before that I didn't even pick up on! Like how Tiffany didn't really like to be shown off but she did it for Gerard.... TOTALLY an early in the relationship thing... Its really setting up that their perfect relationship is starting to show some flaws

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #34 on: 21 August 2011, 06:46:45 »
Creepy? not at all! It's nice to finally talk to you since I've seen you around the forum but we've never actually talked. :)

Yeah, I'm definitely expecting some big bumps in the relationship especially since his last one was with Shakira! and I broke it up... oh dear. :o

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #35 on: 21 August 2011, 06:51:57 »
::lol:: All will be revealed soon!


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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #36 on: 21 August 2011, 07:39:37 »
I feel super new to fan fic commenting again. I haven't seeked out new fics for awhile now so apologies if my comments tend to kind of suck. I really enjoyed your fic so far! I like the setups! They're so interesting. So much to read! I want to know what will happen to everyone. And that last bit, awww I feel for Tawnee!! Your BFF leaving? I'd be heartbroken too. Really enjoying this fic!! Update soon!

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Sorry but - HELLO 4 GUESTS! Enjoying the fic??
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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #37 on: 21 August 2011, 12:14:04 »
Tiffany standing up for herself to Miranda I love it!

I can see why Mariyah would want to see him but Kaka is kind of right tbh. Poor Cris :(

Margos off to Barcelona :o. I hope Tawnees going to be okay. If she doesnt go to Barca with her I hope the other girls will be nice to her. They seem cool :)

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #38 on: 21 August 2011, 15:44:26 »
I love this story. ;D

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #39 on: 21 August 2011, 18:11:25 »
loving this!

Tiffany kicks ass! lol. I don't see why Miranda's acting like that towards her, though. Do I smell competition? :P

Aww, Cristiano :( I can only imagine how bad it feels to be in his position. Mariyah should really make up her mind.

Me and Aaron are naughty little kids  :mrgreen: Poor Tawnee. She sounds taken aback by the situation. But I have a feeling there's an interesting twist coming up for her! hehe

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #40 on: 21 August 2011, 21:58:37 »
I think out of all of these amazing characters that you've put together I am genuinely interested in the one that we know the least about; Miranda. I feel like there is so much more to her than 'just another snobby WAG'. I feel like there is something more about her that made her this way and I can't wait to figure that out :D Or maybe I'm just over thinking things, and hey that's cool too :P

I feel really bad for Cristiano because I can see that Mariyah is still totally in love with Cesc and it's not fair to be tagging Cristiano along like that - when she knows that her heart lays somewhere else. I know it must be really hard having to break up with him but when she does that he'll be able to move on and if she really loves him that's what she'll want for him.

I feel like Tawnee and Margo getting along like that after so long is really just a little too good to be true. I think sooner or later their past and/or their new found changes and differences will catch up with them and a bunch of shit's going to happen.

Anyways amazing work maahlove :) Update soon because I totally cannot wait to see what'll happen next :D

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #41 on: 22 August 2011, 09:18:51 »
Cristiano needs to fight for his woman! Hehe. & All the WAGs sound super amazing :D This was just a great chapter. & Jhonny got transferred to FCB? :O Margo is leaving meeeeee?! Oh noo. Hehhe. Margo cannot leave me. I should totally go with her ;D That'd be great.

Gosh, girrrrrrl. This story has got me completely hooked(: I want to read more. Please, please update soon(: You are an amazing writer, dearest.

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #42 on: 24 August 2011, 05:46:25 »
Seriously?! You're Cristiano Ronaldo, fight for your girl!!!
I never thought I'd be on Team Cris LOL

Not sure how I feel about Tiffany and Miranda yet!
And poor Tawnee, I hope she'll be okay!!
Great update, can't wait for the next one :)

Xoxo, tamy.
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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
« Reply #43 on: 24 August 2011, 19:48:50 »
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

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Re: When Life Was Simple- Chapter 1-Part 2! Updated 21/08/11 :D
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Ok so I just wanted to say a MASSIVE thank you to each and everyone of you for giving my fic such positive feedback. I wish to continue to impress you girls with my writing in the future. Sorry this updates a bit late, but I've been getting my Uni stuff sorted. Here's your Author replies  :-*

AH LOVE IT!!

okay so Tiffany... I don't know how to feel about her yet.  LOVE that she can defend herself, but no need to get super defensive.  The WAGS are used to wearing their fancy fashions!!

Poor Cristiano! but seriously, like Kaka said he's so stupid!  Clearly Mariyah has feelings for Cesc and he's letting her run right into his arms!  I hope she realizes who she really loves soon

loved the dinner party scene!  I was so expecting an engagement so the transfer came as a HUGE surprise!! Ashleigh and Aaron seem so adorable!  Poor Tawnee, I hope she makes friends with some of the WAGS at the dinner so she has a friend when Margo goes away :(
Haha, I think she may have just felt really insecure, so the only way she could make herself feel better was to lash out like that? You'll see more of her character soon though hun ;)
Haha Everyone's saying that  :mrgreen: Maybe he doesn't want to?Maybe he feels like he's already lost the batlle so the whats the point in getting hurt again? We'll see soon ;)
The dinner party scene was so hard to write,so Im glad you liked it.Dont worry the English WAG are definitely going to get more of a look in from now on ;)
You know me, full of surprises  :mrgreen: Gosh you know how hard it was for me to write this update. If I don't put it up now, I don't think I ever will. Wish there was a chapter which I was 100% happy with.
Thanks for reading and Commenting hun  :-*

So...I wonder why Miranda was so mean to me :'( Glad to see I can stand up for myself though :D I hope it'll be different with the rest of the WAGs.

I can understand why she wanted to see him. It's hard not to see someone for 8 years. Someone you love, even if they're just a best friend. But gah, Cristiano has such an awkward situation to handle. It's hard to trust someone you love so much when they're going to see someone they [used to] love so much!

I totally expected an engagement too ::lol:: but wow I feel bad for Tawnee now. Finally got our of her shell again and now the only person she has really talked to is moving to a different country.
Wonder if Tawnee will go with Margo...hmmm.

Love itttt. Can't wait for more! :D

Maybe she's just jealous? Everyone seems to want more Miranda? Will definitely see what I can do. After all the readers are always right haha. You'll be seeing more of your character soon hun  :-*
She has been seeing him, but its been on very rare occasions, I think she's just very confused,she doesn't know what to do with herself, I think she truly feels horrible for hurting both Cris and Cesc.  :'(
 ::lol:: Full of surprises me!  :mrgreen: You'll see what happens when Margo and Johnny arrive in Spain in the next update ;)
Thanks for reading and Commenting   :-*


I feel super new to fan fic commenting again. I haven't seeked out new fics for awhile now so apologies if my comments tend to kind of suck. I really enjoyed your fic so far! I like the setups! They're so interesting. So much to read! I want to know what will happen to everyone. And that last bit, awww I feel for Tawnee!! Your BFF leaving? I'd be heartbroken too. Really enjoying this fic!! Update soon!

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Sorry but - HELLO 4 GUESTS! Enjoying the fic??
It's ok, Im just happy to know that you read and enjoy the fic ;)  Thanks, it's so hard to write about SO many different characters but I hope im doing a semi-decent job :D Your character has been introduced in this fic, but you'll see more of her in the next chap ;)
Thanks for reading and Commenting hun  :-*


Tiffany standing up for herself to Miranda I love it!

I can see why Mariyah would want to see him but Kaka is kind of right tbh. Poor Cris :(

Margos off to Barcelona :o. I hope Tawnees going to be okay. If she doesnt go to Barca with her I hope the other girls will be nice to her. They seem cool :)


Hahah, all will be revealed soon. I just want to apologize for not using your character so much up to this point. I promise from now on she will have a more prominent role ;)
Thanks for reading and Commenting babe :-*

I love this story. ;D

Thanks for reading and Commenting hun. It means a lot to me  :-*

loving this!

Tiffany kicks ass! lol. I don't see why Miranda's acting like that towards her, though. Do I smell competition? :P

Aww, Cristiano :( I can only imagine how bad it feels to be in his position. Mariyah should really make up her mind.

Me and Aaron are naughty little kids  :mrgreen: Poor Tawnee. She sounds taken aback by the situation. But I have a feeling there's an interesting twist coming up for her! hehe

Tiffany does kick ass! I love the way she defends herself. No-one gets the better of her  :mrgreen:

Haha, you certainly are! I just wanted to say sorry for not using your character that much so far, even though you've been an amazing reviewer. From now on you and Aaron will be in the fic ALOT more. I promise  :-*

Thanks for reading and Commenting hun  :-*

I think out of all of these amazing characters that you've put together I am genuinely interested in the one that we know the least about; Miranda. I feel like there is so much more to her than 'just another snobby WAG'. I feel like there is something more about her that made her this way and I can't wait to figure that out :D Or maybe I'm just over thinking things, and hey that's cool too :P

I feel really bad for Cristiano because I can see that Mariyah is still totally in love with Cesc and it's not fair to be tagging Cristiano along like that - when she knows that her heart lays somewhere else. I know it must be really hard having to break up with him but when she does that he'll be able to move on and if she really loves him that's what she'll want for him.

I feel like Tawnee and Margo getting along like that after so long is really just a little too good to be true. I think sooner or later their past and/or their new found changes and differences will catch up with them and a bunch of shit's going to happen.

Anyways amazing work maahlove :) Update soon because I totally cannot wait to see what'll happen next :D

First of all thank you for the AMAZING review  :-* It means a lot that a great writer such as yourself likes my writing
:D I want to apologize for this shitty comment but I'm in such a rush to get the update up. I've been working on it non-stop for 3 hours now.
You may just be right hmmm :mrgreen: Your character has just been introduced hun, you will be in the next chapter :D I hope you enjoy it.
Thanks for reading hun  :-* :-*


Cristiano needs to fight for his woman! Hehe. & All the WAGs sound super amazing :D This was just a great chapter. & Jhonny got transferred to FCB? :O Margo is leaving meeeeee?! Oh noo. Hehhe. Margo cannot leave me. I should totally go with her ;D That'd be great.

Gosh, girrrrrrl. This story has got me completely hooked(: I want to read more. Please, please update soon(: You are an amazing writer, dearest.

Awww, thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you think I'm a good writer.
I hope you continue to read and comment on my fic hun.
Love you  :-*


Seriously?! You're Cristiano Ronaldo, fight for your girl!!!
I never thought I'd be on Team Cris LOL

Not sure how I feel about Tiffany and Miranda yet!
And poor Tawnee, I hope she'll be okay!!
Great update, can't wait for the next one :)

Xoxo, tamy.

Haha, I don't think he really feels like he can right now. Hahah seriously? he's not that bad is he? He's a sweetheart in this though  ::lol:: Thanks for commenting.I promise there will be more of you in the next chapter  :-*

Once again thanks for reading and commenting.


Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

Thanks for commenting babe. I'm glad you liked the story. I hope you continue reading  :-*