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Author: emmasays
Rating: R
Category: Drama
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Length: 'However-I-feel-like' length.
Summary: "You will fly and you will crawl
God knows even angels fall
No such thing as you lost it all
God knows even angels fall."

Beta: MSWord.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the people I write about, except my two OC's. The guys in the story are a work of hotness.
Authors Notes: This was originally going to be based around TOWIE and MIC, but then I came to my senses. I've changed the format now after realising how much I loved writing about BPL.
Dreams that Glitter is taken from the Girls Aloud song 'Call the Shots', and Even Angels Fall is taken by the song by Jessica Riddle (I love it. Listen to it <3)
Thank you to Camila for the graphics <3
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« Last Edit: 28 January 2012, 16:42:53 by Emmaisms »

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Casting Open]
« Reply #1 on: 16 November 2011, 05:20:10 »
Bitches be all up on my money maker 8)

ps, youve made me obsessed with Made in Chelsea, Aunt Pene are not please aha
« Last Edit: 16 November 2011, 05:30:41 by Camila7 »

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Casting Open]
« Reply #2 on: 16 November 2011, 05:23:47 »
Made in Chelsea. LOL. I don't know how those prats get those girls... rolleyesx Can't wait to read this!

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Casting Open]
« Reply #3 on: 16 November 2011, 10:04:44 »
Intresting! Cant wait!

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Casting Open]
« Reply #4 on: 16 November 2011, 10:13:56 »
ooh, can't wait to read it!

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Casting Open]
« Reply #5 on: 17 November 2011, 02:15:58 »
Writing an update right now.

Casting is still open, FYI ;)

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Re: Dreams That Glitter - First chapter [20/11/2011]
« Reply #6 on: 20 November 2011, 04:31:22 »
Chapter 1

"Charley!"

"Over here Charley!"

"Where's Fernando, Charley?"


Tossing her hair over her shoulder nonchalantly, she struck a stellar pose for the paparazzi. If there was one thing she was good at, it was acting up. Shed spent most of her teenage years living in the shadows of El Niño - Spains national treasure, so shed had to learn how to be seen. And boy was it working a treat...

"Charley," Jack Wilshere nodded at her with a look of smug satisfaction on his face as he passed her. The blonde to his side cast her a look of utter resentment before pulling her date inside the building.

One BBM - 'Inside the club... Don't embarrass me'

She laughed, "Oh brother, like I'm going to make it that easy for you."

*

"This was all very last minute," Camila Cordova fiddled a piece of dark hair around her finger as she helped herself to a glass of crystal, "Not that I'm complaining. You know I love this place."

Fernando Torres smirked, "Call it a sixth sense..."

She gave his hand a squeeze but he quickly withdrew, wounding her,

"I'm sorry," He ran a hand through his hair, "But you know the rules."

She nodded, slumped in defeat, "Let's get a booth."

"I have one specially reserved..."

"Out of the way of everyone, I suppose,"

He nodded, "Just how we like it."

*

"If you're going to complain then we may as well not be here," Jack Wilshere sniped,

"Why would I complain? I love being your bit of the side." His girlfriend tutted,

Jack sighedm reaching out and stroking her cheek, "Babe you know you're so much more than that..."

"And if SHE turns up?" Alyssa snapped,

"If she turns up then she turns up... So be it. Were ancient history now."

"You're a liar."

"I am not..."

"You're a liar. It's never going to be history between you two cos that would require getting over eachother..."

"Then why are you here?" Jack snapped in agitation, "I'm running out of reasons to show you that I love you. We have history, don't we? No matter what happens..."

"You keep on coming back, I know," She replied, "I'm just not sure whether that's a good thing or a bad thing."

"Babe..."

Alyssa shook her head and then clicked her fingers at a waiter and glowered at him before walking away.

Jack sighed, shoving his hands in his pockets. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Fernando Torres talking to a member of staff, a small brunette next to him. She smiled coyly and he flashed her his best dimpled smile.

One BBM - Hurry up big man. A party aint a party without Wilshere.

*

Adam Johnson made himself comfortable in his booth, nursing his pint of beer with a contented look on his face.

If anything wasn't going to let him down, it would be beer. He could get shit on by every girl possible but in the face of crisis and making him feel better, alcohol never failed. He had been called sad, pathetic, wimpish, you name it after Lucy had left him... and so he should have. He'd hardly dealt with the split in the most conventional of ways. But that's what he got for sleeping with a glamour model, he guessed.

Bloody girls, always asking for the world...

"Hi."

He looked up, his eyes widened at the sight of the bronzed girl infront of him, a small smile on her face. And then he looked around.

"I'm talking to you..." she spoke, undeterred, "I'm Charley."

"I know who you are..."

She smiled at him slyly.

"You're with Wilshere..." He pointed out.

He recognised her alright. Fernando Torres' kid sister and Jack Wilshere's WAG's - or one of them anyway. The kid had so many girls fighting over him he'd lost count.

"Not anymore," she replied, "I'm dateless now."

Adam raised an eyebrow,

She pouted, taking it as her cue to sit down next to him, "Oh come on... Do you seriously think I don't know about your reputation? You give it the sweetness and light when you're doing the interviews but I know what you're really like."

"What AM I really like?" He asked,

"You're a whore," she ran a hand down his Armani clad chest playing with his tie, "You use girls like they're disposable razors. You crave the spotlight so much you even went with some Big Brother winning Glamour model who'd already had two of your teammates... And Jordan, real-"

Adam grabbed her hand stopping her, "What do you want kid?"

"I'm 22 years old," She spoke, undeterred,

"What is it? Did I nail one of your friends or something? Did I break her heart?" He asked cockily,

He couldn't be dealing with this right now, not when he had other issues to sort out.
 
She laughed, mockly.

"What?!" He scoffed,

She hopped up onto a stool: "I like you. I think you're hot."

"You- you do?" He gulped,

Yeah... In a suit. I mean wow." She licked her lips,

Adam raised an eyebrow mischievously.

"I bet you look a million times better without it." Her fingers played with the poppers of his shirt, unbuttoning the top few. His hands ran down her back and he pulled her onto his lap.

"What's your game?" He mumbled as he pulled away briefly, "What are you up to?"

"At the moment-"

His eyes widened as her hand grasped his crotch massaging it gently.

"Fuck," he choked,

"I'm showing you what a kid can do..."

"Here?"

"You never done it in a club before?"

"Your brother is standing a few metres away from us..."

"If you'd rather think about him."

"Charley!"

"Do you want me, Adam?"

"Y-Yeah."

"Then stop being a little bitch, and take me."

He raised an eyebrow, and before he could question his sanity he had grabbed her hand and was leading her out of the club.

*

Camila stirred her cocktail and sighed.

"What is she doing?" Fernando scowled, "She's acting like a whore."

"At least she's getting some tonight," She replied,

Fernando glowered at the younger girl, "That's my sister you're talking about."

She popped the cherry from her cocktail in her mouth, "You know she slept with at least three guys at summer camp right? She's not innocent."

He scowled and watched as his sister disappeared into the night.

"Nando..." She snapped, "Cool it on the bitchface."

"I'm not doing the bitchface."

Camila shook her head, "If you're going to carry on I'm going to go and fuck Theo Walcott... I see the way he looks at me..."

"Like hell you are," He grasped her hand, "You... are mine tonight."

She smirked, "Then what are we hanging about here for? It's boring and I bought new underwear. It'd be a shame to let it go to waste."

*

Alyssa ran a hand through her hair and ordered another drink.

"Planning on drinking til you've got no feelings anymore?"

She spun around as a ridiculously tall blonde approached her. He flashed her a cheeky smile and she returned to her drink.

"Sounds like an awesome idea. Join me? Uh who are you?" She asked,

"I'm Joe," He replied,

"Hmm another J. England is full of J's..." Her words slurred, courtesy of that last vodka,

He raised an eyebrow and she laughed.

"I know you now." She held a finger up, "You saved that goal."

"Generally what I tend to do," He grinned,

"So you must be good with your hands..."

He smirked.

"I am..." She grimaced, "-drunk."

"Americans are such lightweights. How do you know Wilshere?"

"Long dreadfully boring story," She wafted her hand in the air, "I wanna know about you... and how good you are with your hands and- woah, you're painfully tall."

"Maybe you're painfully small?"

"Maybe," She replied, "But you're still painfully tall."

"Okay painfully small girl," He laughed, "You have definitely had enough."

She pouted, "I was just getting started. Sambuca anyone?"

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [first chapter posted - 20th November 2011]
« Reply #7 on: 20 November 2011, 05:07:30 »
I love it! I'll be back to review asap ;)

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [first chapter posted - 20th November 2011]
« Reply #8 on: 20 November 2011, 05:27:38 »
Okay... So I'm a little confused.

But I look forward to being not so confused ;)

Love it and love you. As usual....

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [first chapter posted - 20th November 2011]
« Reply #9 on: 20 November 2011, 10:05:26 »
Its the first chapter and its already full of things!

Looking forward to future chapters!

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [first chapter posted - 20th November 2011]
« Reply #10 on: 21 November 2011, 02:25:07 »
It's true... You English and your J's! Charley is hot and cold with Adam right there... No wonder he is confused! More later! JJJJJJ

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [first chapter posted - 20th November 2011]
« Reply #11 on: 22 November 2011, 17:40:04 »
I love it! I'll be back to review asap ;)

Thanks for your comment :)

Okay... So I'm a little confused.

But I look forward to being not so confused ;)

Love it and love you. As usual....

It will make sense in a few chapters time once I get the character relationships out of the way.
Love you lervvv

Its the first chapter and its already full of things!

Looking forward to future chapters!


Thank you :)

It's true... You English and your J's! Charley is hot and cold with Adam right there... No wonder he is confused! More later! JJJJJJ

J's are sexy... like Daddy Wilshere lately. Have you seen him with his facial hair? Me gusta droool
 
Treat em mean, keep em keen?
Adam's got a few tricks up his sleeves :P

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Authors replies - 22nd November 2011]
« Reply #12 on: 23 November 2011, 00:31:07 »
ayyo I loved this with a passion 8)

I like how its confusing because that means that these will be complex little darlings well have to figure out.

I love you and this chapter

bye :)

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [Authors replies - 22nd November 2011]
« Reply #13 on: 23 November 2011, 22:45:50 »
ayyo I loved this with a passion 8)

I like how its confusing because that means that these will be complex little darlings well have to figure out.

I love you and this chapter

bye :)

Thank you Mme. Malik.


An update will be posted tonight after the football :) ;)
If Torres scores, there'll be a double update.

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Re: Dreams That Glitter [2|I - 24th November 2011]
« Reply #14 on: 24 November 2011, 04:08:45 »
Chapter 2

Part 1

"...And I really want it to be that colour," Giorgina spoke, flicking some hair out of her face, "I know it's hardsly traditional but... those colours mean a lot to us."
"It's hardly traditional," The wedding planner mirrored her words, "-But, I don't see why it can't be done."
Giorgina beamed reaching out and grabbing her fiances hand, "Are you listening babe?"
"What? Oh, yeah," Conor nodded, "Sorry. I was miles away."
"He's so tired," Giorgina explained to the wedding planner, "This seasons going to be his first real season in first team. You can imagine it-"
"Is that everything?" Conor asked,
"I know I drive you mad but... I want it to be perfect"
Conor wrapped his arms around her, "And it will be... I promise."
She sighed, "I trust you... with all my heart."
"Good," he grinned cupping her face in his hands, "Cos I'm going to keep it safe forever."

"Lucky bastard," Aaron mumbled, eyeing Conor and Giorgina enviously.
Jack scoffed flicking through his issue of 442, "What's lucky about giving your life to one girl? It's tragic."
"So you and Lys?" Aaron raised an eyebrow,
"We're different," Jack smirked,
"I fucking know that mate. Class of your own you two. On-off-on-on a break-definitely off-on-off again-just fucking-we love eachother this is it this time-off-on..."
"Yes yes well at least were not boring... When was the last time you had a proper relationship?" Jack scoffed,
"I was in one for six years!" Aaron exclaimed,
"Key word being was there... Look how that bastard turned out," Jack scratched his chin,
"Fuck you Wilshere. It wasn't my fault her ambitions only stretched as far as "I might go to the other end of Wales"" Aaron moaned,
"Girls and ambitions shouldn't mix. Not when they're dating Aaron Ramsey. Who needs ambitions when you can have everything catered to you?" Jack asked arrogantly,
"I bet you're mothers so proud," Aaron grumbled,
Jack grinned, "I know your mum is."
Aaron scowled, "You did not just make a mum joke."
"I'd never make a joke of her sweet-"
Punch.
Conor broke apart from where he stood with Giorgina and rushed towards them, "Jesus, Ramsey!"
"He did a mum joke!" Aaron complained,
"Wilshere..." Conor sighed,
Jack smirked, "He's so easy to wind up."

Later the day,
Giorgina twirled around and gushed making the blonde roll her eyes.
"How many until you know it's the one?"
"You just know..." Giorgina replied, "And this- I just know."
"Great. Can we leave now?" Alyssa asked,
"I'll take it." Giorgina beamed at the woman,
The woman clapped her hands excitedly, "Wonderful. It looks divine."
"Yeah yeah lady. Box it up. Charge the card and let me go and eat." Alyssa snapped,
The woman glared at her, "Obviously not a romantic."
Giorgina rushed into the changing room and after a few agonising moments of holding a Death stare with the shop assistant, Alyssa turned back to find her friends back in her clothes, "What's up Lys?"
Alyssa shrugged, "Nothing."
"I know you... I know when something isn't up. Is it Jack?"  Giorgina asked,
"When isn't it Jack?"
"I know as Conors fiancé I'm not supposed to saythis but... He's a dick. Why are you even putting up with him anymore?"
"Cos I love him?"
"Love only goes a long way... You deserve heaps better." Giorgina replied,
"I think that but... then he does something nice and he says something and he... looks at me that way and-" Alyssa stopped and Giorgina sighed, "I know it's crazy."
Gi shrugged, "Love rarely isn't..."
"He tells me he's done with Charley and then..." Alyssa trailed off,
"Charley Torres is a rat... She's good for one thing an it ain't going for dinner that's for sure. Trust me. She's cool for a fling and not much else. Did you hear the shot she pulled at the opening of The new bar last week?" Giorgina raised an eyebrow,
"Yeah," Alyssa shrugged,
"Exactly. Does that really scream marriage material? Nah... But you." Giorgina winked,
Alyssa laughed.
"You know I'm right," Giorgina grinned, "Now come on... let's go get us some food before we die of starvation."

Charley walked towards the counter and grabbed the empty milk bottle: "Any else?"
No answer.
"Am I talking to myself?" Charley asked,
"Get your boyfriend to get you some," Fernando replied snidely,
Charley raised an eyebrow, "Which one?"
Fernandos lip curled up into a snarl and she smirked
"Mierde Charley! Why do you do this to me? Just as I was having a good month... Press keeping off of my back. You had to go and-"
"Oh what?" She moaned, "Have fun?"
"Be a whore," Fernando replied simply making her wince.
She shook her head, "We are in the 21st century Fernando. I'm not going to act like a suppressed animal to make you look good..."
"Decency? Self respect?" He ranted,
"Like your whore has?" Charley asked,
"That's different!" Fernando snarled,
"You're shagging my school mate while your wife is in Liverpool looking after your two kids," She frowned, "How is that not worse than a 22 year old going out and having fun?"
"I'm keeping them under a roof, I provide for then," He replied,
"Oh you're all heart," She piped up sarcastically,
"I don't have to answer to you you're just a kid," He fumed,
"That's not what Adam Johnson said... Or your old friend Daniel Agg-" She started but his fist connecting with the fridge next to her told her she should really tread carefully. He was a ticking timebomb, her brother. And didn't she know it...
"I'm warning you!" He yelled,
"Go ahead and I'll tell your precious wifey exactly what you're doing when you say you're looking for a family home," She hissed,
His nostrils flared angrily and she placed a hand on her hip, "My terms el niño... Face it. My terms, my rules."

Part 2 will be up tomorrow. I'm tired :)