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New fic...CRAZY KIYA RE
« on: 31 December 2007, 02:46:56 »
This fic is Bollywood inspired. I'll probably have some song and dance invloved. ::lol:: The title means You Drive Me Crazy in Hindi. It's from a song from the bollywood movie Dhoom 2. So,enjoy!!!


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?There he is, the man of my dreams.? Rani said breathlessly. Her sister, Padma, looked at who she talking about. That man was Shahrukh. She was in love him ever since she could remember. She had saw him as a little girl and was immediately entranced. His hazel eyes always had a gleam to them. His smile was infectious, his dimples adorable. He was charming and charismatic. He was an older man, but she always wanted to marry him. She didn?t ever think it was possible, but she would always pray to Kamadeva and Rati the Love Gods. She would also pray to Lakshmi the goddess of wealth, and beauty.

They locked eyes and Rani held her breath. This is how a God must look like. He must be sent from above. He smiled his amazing smile and she blushed and dropped her eyes. ?Why don?t you talk to him?? asked Padma.

Her eyes widened. ?No way!?

?But you?re so in love him.? her sister said while rolling her eyes.

She watched as he greeted her aunts. Her family would never allow him to marry someone like her. She was half Indian half Caucasian.  But felt more connected to her Hindu side. Her father abandoned her and her mother, her mother remarried and had two more children, her sister and brother. Then her mother died suddenly when she was eight. Her stepfather always treated her as one of his own. Never made her feel like she was an outsider, even defended her to other family members that called her a half breed. One of her aunts whispered something in his ear and he turned around and looked at her. She quickly grabbed her sister and walked over to the buffet table.

?Oh god, they must have said something.? Rani said nervously smoothing out her red sari.

?What do you mean?? Padma asked.

?Didn?t you see that? He knows. Oh god he knows.?

?Calm down Rani, maybe it?s not what you think. Maybe he doesn?t know.?

She gave her sister a pointed look. ?Are you serious?? If he didn?t know before, he certainly knows now.?

?Rani.? said a voice behind her.

She turned around and saw Shahrukh standing there.

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?You love me, don?t you?? he whispered in her ear.
 
Her legs felt like jello as he wrapped his arms around her waist. She could not believe what was happening. All that praying worked.


He made her feel like she was the only woman alive. He made her feel beautiful for that night.  But now her heart was broken, shattered into a million pieces. The man that she had loved, had used her and left her. She wrapped the bed sheet around her tightly and sobbed.
« Last Edit: 31 December 2007, 03:08:42 by pukers808 »

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Re: New fic...CRAZY KIYA RE
« Reply #1 on: 31 December 2007, 02:56:38 »
 8) Interesting, a half-breed Hindi. Should make for a great read. Well Khan saw her, but she jumped to conclusions... update when you can hun :D

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Re: New fic...CRAZY KIYA RE
« Reply #2 on: 31 December 2007, 06:53:40 »
Pua u must be insane for thinking this wasn't a good prologue, its excellent. update pronto!
« Last Edit: 2 January 2008, 08:49:20 by Lilis »

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Re: New fic...CRAZY KIYA RE
« Reply #3 on: 31 December 2007, 07:36:52 »
 :'( ah, now it says your offline, sleepy?

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Re: New fic...CRAZY KIYA RE
« Reply #4 on: 24 November 2008, 15:44:44 »
I love it :D
You should definitely continue :)

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« Reply #5 on: 21 January 2011, 12:43:38 »
HI, thanks a lot for this. It really helped me out!